Mystery Boy - Comments

Awee. He loves her. That was a awesome chapter.

dsfasdfsd. SO GOOD. If I could marry a story, it would be this one. Just saying. (:

You're an amazing writer. Don't ever stop!

oh my god! I teared up..im like screaming at the computer "NO DONT MAKE HER LEAVE HIM NOOO!!!'' lol...yea this is a AMAZING story :3 :3 :3 It makes me love Jacky even more xD and I keep thinking when you make her dad drag her back home and stuff that shes gonna have bruises or something and Jacky and/or Ronnie(and/or the guys to) are gonna go nuts on her and her dad lol but seriously...THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!

Not going to lie, I almost cried when Airia's mother told her that she and her father think she should stay away from Jacky. But now that her mother is understanding I'm okay n.n

i was about to go banana sandwich on her mom lol

Haha I love all the punch the mom and dad comments I hope they change their minds!

But please, I can I smack her mom and knee her dad?

But please, I can I smack her mom and knee her dad?

Its. Is. Awesome. <3

Nooo! She can't lose Jacky ;_;

I was gonna punch her mom .__.

I hate that feeling because my best friend and I knew eachother for ten years. She moved and I felt dead for monthes. Her and I no longer talk. It still hurts but now I have a new best friend Macayla and life without her would be worse then losing my other best friend. Macayla has been there with me for everything and I love her with all my heart.

This was AWESOME. Every time you update, I am never disappointed! I just REALLY wanna know what he said. Anyway, great chapter.

Yay! You updated this! It was amazing as always, but I really want to know what Jacky said! Like I really, really want to know and it'll probably bug me for the rest of the night :P

Oh looky here! You updated! WOO! *Highfive*
I knew you'd come through one day. c:
Haha.
I loved it<3

Updateupdateupdate?!
This is my favorite story to read! haha(:

Totally had to miss FIR live and probably the chance to meet them at Warped Tour today because I couldn't get off work :( Totally had free tickets waiting for me, as well :( Boooo.... [okay, so not really story related, but I'm sure some of you can empathize, haha] ... Keep writing! :)

Love this story update soon!

Digging this story as well, grrl :) (I just read "Textbook Romance" as well and wasn't ready for it to be over, so I had to find another one to read, haha)... Just a heads up, though: I've noticed a few minor grammatical errors throughout the first 5 chapters or so (that's about how far I've gotten, anyway, lol). Not so much issues with your writing techniques as they are typos, I believe, but I just wanted to let you know in case you wanted to go back and proof-read/edit to get everything perfect on your stories :)

There are a few things that I thought seemed a bit unrealistic, as well (like, how easily she talked her family into getting her a dog, lol... but then again, that could just be one of your ways of showing how spoiled she is :P teehee). Don't get me wrong; I'm not trying to knock your writing at all! You're definitely one of the better writers on the site and I definitely get sucked into your stories... just wanted to give you a little constructive criticism, so take it as you will :) ... I'll be keeping a lookout for updates! (well, once I get caught up anyway... haha) Have a good one!

PS- Also, I think I may need to marry this Jacky Vincent fellow someday. Get me a sexy husband, UK citizenship, good connections for my band, etc... maybe someday :P haha lololol

Can you pleasepleasepleaseplease update?!
This is my favorite story! D: