Mystery Boy - Comments

I started reading this story just now and I absolutely fell in love with it and once I finished reading your latest chapter I was highly upset someone had the balls to plagiarize your story and I don't think you should delete it, report that story or user to mibba. Don't let some douche stop you from writing .

I would be so sad if you quit & deleted everything, but I would understand. I do think that you should just wait it out and see what happens though, because hopefully the little thief will get booted off or something. Plus, this story, YOUR story, the original Mystery Boy, is NOT poorly written, in fact it is quite the opposite. You're an amazing writer, unlike the thief. c:

I love this so much, but I understand why youd want to take it down. You should report the person, I think. I used to be on another site and that happened to me and I reported it, but it still really hurt you know because it felt like I was worthless for someone to just...do that. It's so dumb! People just can't be creative enough to write their own stuff? Or even bothered to spend the time? I think you should report it and see what happens. The internet can't deny you were the one to post it first and also, this person needs to get a life. I found that not giving into the satisfaction of other people made me feel better so I finished the story before I left the site. Idk, what works for you works for you, just know that I love this story so much and I'll be sad if you end it. You're an amazing writer!

Amazing story, I love it so much ^.^

Damnnn thats a bit of a cliffhanger!

This is probably one of my favorite stories on here...wait stratch that IT IS MY FAVORITE! =)

i declare more jacky time is needed :)

I fuckin love this story right here c:
It's one of the few stories that makes me stay in one place and refuse to stop reading it until I finish. Haha :)
Keep on updating, gurl~

Why is her dad such a dick? Like, really.
I can't wait to read more. c:

Keep it up!

At least she got to go see Ronnie for a little bit before her dad made her think about stuff even more, but I am happy that she made him feel like shit. He deserves it. he needs to remember that she is his biological daughter, so is Taite, but Easton & Decklan aren't. and really he needs to start treating her like his daughter again, not like some nasty disease that came upon his "new" family that he loves so dearly.

Honestly if I was Airea I wouldn't have even gotten out of the car. It seems like her dad doesn't even care or takes how she feels into consideration. He just cares about how happy his 'new' family is. And that really isn't fair to Airea, I can totally understand where she's coming from. Yes, I agree she should give Ina's family a chance but how can she give them a chance when no one is listening to her or how she feels. If they aren't going to give her a chance why should she?

Airea's dad has become a diiiick. I mean damn son. Ina must be a real bitch for him to have changed that much. I mean fuuck bro. If he didn't want another kid he should have wrapped his dick, if that's why there's a stick shoved way up his ass, but if not, he still should have wrapped it up when they fucked....I couldn't help myself for that, I'm sorry..hahah c:
Anyways, I too think Aire should try to get a job & save up her money & get the hell out of that house with people who seem to fuckin hate her.

oh my god!!! pleaaaase update soon!!!! im so in love with this story!!! youre amazing!! keep it up :)

EEP! <3 love it!

^ I completely agree with the comment above me
Perhaps Airea should get a job and start saving to move out? She def has a lot on her plate right now. But at least she did make friends with Ronnie and Jacky, it would have been a lot harder to deal with if she didn't have her friend there.
Haha sorry I'm talking about her like she's a real person (you really make your characters come to life). Hope you feel better and can't wait for the next update.

^ I completely agree with the comment above me
Perhaps Airea should get a job and start saving to move out? She def has a lot on her plate right now. But at least she did make friends with Ronnie and Jacky, it would have been a lot harder to deal with if she didn't have her friend there.
Haha sorry I'm talking about her like she's a real person (you really make your characters come to life). Hope you feel better and can't wait for the next update.

So, things are not right for Kelley to come down, but they are for Ina to have a baby? The fuck? There is no room for a baby in the house, nor does it sound like they have the money for one either. I understand Airea's attitude towards this. Ina & her dad made her life pretty much a living hell, other than her getting to know Jacky & Ronnie & their friends, but they have still fucked her life up on so many levels, they need to let her get completely used to things in their house before they have a damn baby. Things may be better for Ina & her sons, but Airea is used to being, pretty much number one in her dad's life, now she's like nothing to him it seems like. Plus he's letting Ina take over in disciplining Airea, when Airea isn't even her daughter, hell the two barely even know each other. Really the only thing Airea knows about Ina is that her dad cheated/technically still is cheating on her mother with her and that she has three sons, one of which is her half brother.
Guh. Airea's dad aggravates me. Maybe if he gave Airea SOME closure, she wouldn't feel the need to "rebel" against him & his family, well his new family.
Side note: I love this & how you write it. :D

this shit is AWESOME, keep up the good work :)

I feel like I'm in heaven on how much you're updating<3
But, I can't wait for the next update, I feel a lot of drama coming on.
And, I'm honestly excited to see how Airea (sorry if spelled wrong) acts when Kelley comes down. If she's going to change or not.
And, chin up, doe. I'll be here if you ever need to talk. (:

Sooo I really love this story. I can't wait to see where this goes and what twists and turns you have up your sleeve. :) Great job, I'm so looking forward to the next update. And I'm sorry to hear you're not having a good day. I know how that is, if you ever need someone to talk to or just to vent don't hesitate to send an inbox my way. Hope you feel better soon.