Love Like Winter - Comments

ahkdfhakfhakwgfhIOKGH!!! I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! I JUST GOING TO CRY AND DIE FROM CURIOSITY!! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I love Aidan...how he calls Aurora 'Beauty'! I love the line from chapter six as well.....GAHHH! AMAZING!

This is by far the most awesome werewolf-related story that I've ever read. It's even better than Twilight.

Huzzah!

The thing that got me hooked on your story was this semtence in chapter 6: "You’re still young, Beauty. Do you have a boyfriend?”

I like Aurora. It's probably because of her name. But I think she's what it seems as an innocent girl. And Isabelle is just so. . . bitchy. I was like 'Sheesh. What crawled up her arse and died?'. She's just plain annoying to me.

Aidan and that huntsman just seems to have trouble written all over them.

This story is just so - unf.
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I love you and this story. Please update it 8D

First I gotta say
Love the layout.

Now with your story
I love how in the summary you have: "The Pack Laws"
I thought that was totally unique right there
Most werewolve stories don't even tell you.

I gotta say is that you and your co-writer are great together
I mean this is amazing to say the least.
I love the how you guys have written this.
You descriptions and dialogue, makes me melt.

I can't wait for more
Keep up the good work
Both of you
<3

I absolutely adore this.

I read the prologue and first chapter. You really have a solid, strong, and stable story.

I also love the prologue which is the rules of a wolf pack. It tells me off the bat you put a lot of effort towards this.

A gelid breeze brushed through tangled locks of his brown hair, bringing with it the musky smell of the forest and the remarkable mirage of freedom. The dark hairs on his chest perked up in response to the cold, and his sharp brown eyes darted out across the clearing, taking in the crowd of people that stood at his mercy. His taut chest was bare for the world to see, bronzed from hours spent running in the sun, and flecked with dark brown hair that revealed what his animosity.

I just love the build of details not only in that paragraph, but also within the entire chapter. It was highly visual and that's a thing I really like about writing.

I really don't have much to say since this is just lovely.

This seems really good. I can't wait to read the rest of it. It's different from other things I've seen on mibba so far, so a cookie for originality.

Great update honey. Hope you are feeling better.

The layout is very pretty and the banner is just beautiful. The summary was very interesting, it really made me wonder how all of these rules wouod come in play. It wasn't the typical, "He's a dangerous wolf and falling in love blah blah," I think it was pretty clever to use the rules as a summary because it doesn't really give away many ideas but it does make you think on just what it's all about and how these rules would come in play.

I really like the way you started out, how it's all this raw power and the energy of the hunt. I love the description that you guys have, I always think that the more you can clearly describe things the better that the readers can see what you're trying to write out! I think one of my favorite parts was when she was reminiscing about the animal she saw and she kept doubting herself on if there was anything more to the wolf. I think it's the cliche part of not believeing something, like when you're not sure and you don't want to guess but you can't help but wonder? I just found that interesting.

"You want to Urban Culture?", in chapter five; shouldn't it be went to Urban culture since I'm inferring that Urban Culture is where she met Isabelle.

I liked their encounter, and I like it even more that he's a mechanic. That's just hawt~
anyways, it wasn't very over-done in the fact that neither of them were fawning over the other and they didn't just suddenly fall in lve at first sight. (:

She immediately became aware of the taut, gleaming flesh that stared back at her, and she felt warmth spreading through her and a flush claimed her cheeks. The warmth built up like a flame inside of her and wrapped its hands around her chest until she was aware of nothing else besides his utter gorgeousness and masculinity, and it was all she could do not to stare as she forced her eyes to meet his. that was just love~

I'll admit in the last chapter, when I read about them going near the stream I totally thought they were going to go skinny-dipping. Just saying ;)

I am going to stay subscribed because I'm incredibly curious on how Isabelle is going to react to all this. If Aiden starts spending time with Aurora frequently, her power is threatened as Alpha-female. I also wonder how far she'll go to get Aiden back, even if he never was hers in the first place.

i really love this!
please update soon :)

So I just started reading this and I looooooove it. It's like an actual book. Please please please write another chapter!!!!!! I will love you forever if you do :)

Ok I love this story. Its pretty interesting and I love werewolves. So yay its fantastic.

You can't help but smile at Aiden and his shameless flirting but what's gonna happen when Isabelle finds out? dun dun dun dunnn :D

Random story is random but I went to this water park once and they left us do something like cliff diving and my sister and I did it, WORST EXPERIENCE EVER. All I remember is the pain it gave me. I really like Aiden with his playful flirting, its cute, I hope there's more of it. I wonder how Isabelle's going to feel about him hanging out with Aurora?

I'm so very confused as to who's who in the pictures.

I freaking love this.

Haha! I love that bit with the cliff diving! It was absolutely perfect! <3

Well written, well chosen, and without a doubt well played. I absolutely loved it! Especially her being so upset with hm and him just being perfectly fine

Aww, I wanna go cliff diving. Psh, I would have been crawling to the edge with my eyes closed. Curse my fear of heights. I think they are just the cutest couple I've ever read about. Aiden seems so playful with Aurora and they seem to fit so naturally together. I like it, most of the time thrusting your two love interest characters together so quickly won't work, but with the personalities of your characters it really works out well. I love this story and can't wait for another update! (:

I like this a lot. I'm not typically very interested in fantasy stories, so you've done a very good job. Both of your writing styles are wonderfully descriptive, which I just love. I spotted a few typos, but nothing too bad, so just keep an eye out and you're fine. :)

I love this story. and Autumn could have worked too.. LOL

This is definately different but I really like it so far. Can't wait for your next update!! Which I hope will be soon ^^