Love Like Winter - Comments

  • I love this story. I really don't get why you guys don't have more. I like how you are setting things up. It seems like a movie. I love the characters. Even Isabelle as much of a bitch she is, I really like how real she is just like the rest of them! I can't wait to see how you guys have this story evolve! It makes me excited!
    June 25th, 2011 at 12:50am
  • This just keeps getting better and better! Love the latest update and I can't waitbfor the next!
    June 24th, 2011 at 02:22pm
  • What is with the lack of comments man? This story is absolutely amazing. The great detail you two have managed to fit into this story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait to see more from both of you as this story progresses. I really like it. (:
    June 24th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • This is awesome!
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • So, I read the first three chapters before, I don't know what happened. This might have been the story I was commenting on when my computer crashed. However, I can tell you that ya'll teeming up is an excellent idea because you both are writing in a similar style and this is a very interesting concept. It sort of reminds me of Blood and Chocolate which is cool because that was my first werewolf novel to read. Anyway, as I'm on chapter four, I will talk about chapter four.

    I like the way you started it off, although I could have sworn you wrote nippling and not nipping a second look told me I was wrong. Her uncle reacted just how mine would have, not worried about me or anything just the car. It's kind of funny in a way. I like how power hungry Isabelle is, it suits an Alpha-Female very well. (:

    I like the fifth chapter the best. It shows a big difference in characteristics between Aiden and Isabelle. I guess Isabelle was a little wi-otch because of the circumstances with Aiden though. Boys with muscles, they bring out the worst in girls. I like that Aiden brought up Sleeping Beauty 'cause that's totally what I was thinking.

    This story is definitely one to look out for, I can tell. I can't wait to read more. It's got everything I like, competition, werewolves, quality descriptions, and just wonderful solid characters. I can't wait for an update guys, seriously. (:
    June 18th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • I was behind three chapters which ironically I was kinda happy about. It was like I was reading from a book, and I could read as many chapters as I liked, well not necessarily, but I was able to read more than one which was nice. I was kind of surprised she had actually ran into a deer because I thought it was a werewolf but alas the werewolf did come into the picture. I like that she hadn't run into to him to be honest because it kinda would seem to plotted I guess. To me, I could see Aiden trying to scare the deer into the street to get hit by the car so it'd be easier for him. That's just what I'm inferring here though. (I'm commenting while I read) Oh my god! Isabelle works, oh shit and she's meeting the human that she already doesn't like. Wow that's greattt! I didn't think they'd actually do anything while they were human to be honest. It makes me wonder just what the human to werewolf ratio is. Oh! And she's meeting Aiden! Wow. This is going to be really interesting. I hope they have like an affair.
    June 17th, 2011 at 11:53pm
  • I saw so many new chapters and I was like yes! lol

    Daaang I love this. The description is really unique and it makes me feel all edgy and animal like just reading it. Not to mention I liked that the guy was hairy to sort of symbolize things it makes me think like why aren't the twilights hairy?!

    Your styles don't conflict at all and like wow talk about the circle of life o.o how drastic to experience that all at once. I mean it in a good way though it keeps things moving but builds character.

    I'm already subbed but if I could do it again I would ;]
    June 17th, 2011 at 05:21pm
  • You two have rather different writing styles. Both are very wonderful. This story is pure bliss~! <3 Gawd, I cant wait to see how it develops. ^^

    Just saw on little typo in two; and I thought I'd point it out: The poor thing…she killed it. Shit, now what? Aurora not only had anger issues, but ((not)) animal killer was added to her rep?

    (()) = shouldn't that be now?

    Wonderful story. Please continue~!
    June 16th, 2011 at 08:05am
  • I really hope that she's not the love interest in here all because I'm a sucker for forbidden romances and the alpha being interested in a human would be super interesting. I like the way this chapter was written, it flowed nicely, and had the perfect amount of dialogue and description. I kind of don't like the omega (mostly because like I mentioned before I want him to be interested in a human). I really like his name, and I find it ironic that the girl's name is Isabella like Isabella Swan in Twilight since she turned into a vampire. Just wanted to point that out. Not that this reminds me of Twilight at all. These werewolves sound legit, twilight werewolves did not.
    June 15th, 2011 at 06:49pm
  • The summary caught my attention. I like the Rules for the werewolves. That was the first thing I really liked. The layout is pretty cool, the guy in the icon at the top looks like Dave Grohl so thats a plus. This is like the fourth story I've seen though with the wooden planks as a border to the left side of the story so maybe something else would look good cause that's getting a bit repetitive. The prologue was short and sweet. I don't really like when prologues are dragged out. I think it takes too much from the story. Other than the border, I loved everything and I can wait for an update.
    June 15th, 2011 at 04:16am
  • I love this already! UPDATEEEE SOOOOON :)))))))
    June 15th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • I am so excited for this! I love the idea of the rules as the summary! It's awesome! And I love the layout! It is very appealing! And I love the prologue. Your writing style shines through as always! You create so many questions so effortlessly. It makes it all so exciting. I really wan to know who is who and what is going on and what will happen in the end.
    June 14th, 2011 at 09:44pm
  • I love the rules on the front. Five made me go all :O. No food! D:< But I'm sure it keeps them in line. ;D So, I'll be subscribing. Of course. xD

    I love the prologue. Very much make me want to know more~! I'm kind of impatient for the next chapter. I must know what happens! Very nicely written and this seems more preface-sy. Like, ooo! What happens to lead up to this point. Or whatever. I don't know what's gonna happen next. So...please update soon guys. This is so far...like...perfect. o.o
    June 14th, 2011 at 09:22pm
  • The layout is really amazing, and the summary was very good along with the prologue, I'm looking forward to read the rest :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • I really like the layout and the rules/summary was cool too
    it had a good hook to it already and the rules seemed realistic
    (as realistic as a werewolf story can be that is haha)
    I'm guessing a werewolf/human will fall in love, drama - and more drama !
    As multiple people said, I like how you included silver in there
    Like she was going to kill this werewolf to get him out of her life
    and i liked the hunter/hunted thing at the beginning too, that was nice
    the last two sentences really made me fall for the story, and what ultimately made me subscribe
    it made me think about if a werewolf is trying to hurt her.
    I am not sure what you two will be doing with this - but I am excited :).
    amazing job so far!
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • I think the rules was a great way of hooking the reader from the start, because there are so many different directions this could be taken in so many different directions and I'm interested to see where it actually heads. Like WTFMusicPerson said, I like that you kept some of the well-known facts about werewolves in the story like the silver. I'm going to subscribe so I can see where this goes :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • I agree with WTF, I love the rules and thought of a forbiden romance is always great. I'm quite excited.
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:28pm
  • Ok I really like this idea especially because it keeps some traditionalism in it you know the whole silver thing and such. I also like the idea of putting the rules there it just makes me wonder which will be broken how by who etc. =] I really dig it.
    June 14th, 2011 at 08:25pm
  • I love this. I love werewolf stories, and I think this is going to be really interesting. I feel like this will be more original then most werewolf stories out there, and I like the rules, although harsh, they're realistic. I could see a werewolf pack having those rules. In sixth grade I think I had to watch a film on this man who went to live with werewolves and the way the pack worked it was kind of like the rules you described. I think this will be very realistic.
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:30pm