Can Anybody Hear Me - Comments

  • I just felt my heart break when I read the last chapter!
    Shania and her mother decided to move because they can't handle things after London was ripped away from them.
    And how Shania just said without any emotions to her best friends that she made when she moved there that she is moving away just so soon.
    I am angry that Shania thinks she can cut the ties that she made with so many people that stood by her and not look back.
    And I feel even worse for Matt because he begged her to stay but she still told him that he is leaving!
    Now onto the sequel!
    This is an amazing story!
    April 24th, 2012 at 09:12am
  • Woah Shania losted it a bit!
    She is realizing how things got so screwed up.
    She is retelling everything to the moment her family moved there and until that shooting at the school.
    Shania is really bitter toward her extended family because they show up out of the blue, grieving for the loss of London when they haven't talked to Shania or any of the family in over seven years.
    Talk about messed up!
    I guess that was her coping method to try get herself under wraps.
    April 24th, 2012 at 09:05am
  • Man that was freaking heartless of that bitch Arianna making a comment about not having to pay for another cap and gown because London is gone.
    I am glad that Shana kicked that bitch's ass and she calls herself London's friend? What the hell!
    Matt will always want the old Shania back but what happened to her has changed her completely and she won't be the same after this.
    I am glad that Matt was there to give some comfort to Shania despite that she got very violent toward him when he tried to get closer to her.
    On to the next chapter! X3
    April 24th, 2012 at 09:02am
  • Holy shit! Holy shit! Holy shit!
    I can't believe I missed out on so many chapters for this story!
    And you got the sequel started already!
    Woah so London was pregnant with Keanu baby but they both died when she ruthlessly shot down.
    And I definitely did not see the romance between Keanu and London, I guess that's why London was so distant with Shania.
    She was pregnant with Shania's best friend's baby, and the same goes for Keanu, he was really distant with Shania too.
    Shania completely at the end of chapter 29 when Matt tried to comfort her.
    I better catch up with the rest of the chapters!
    April 24th, 2012 at 08:57am
  • I really liked the update! Can't wait for the last update!
    April 5th, 2012 at 09:35am
  • They give some odd names in that family
    April 5th, 2012 at 04:33am
  • Blue balloons!!!!!! : )
    April 5th, 2012 at 12:46am
  • No worries. I don't mond the waiting since you nevercease to impress me with your writing. It's worth the wait, taha. Nah, the Norwegian way of saying it would be more similar to Mah-ree. Really now! That's cool! At lease I think it is, taha!
    Hm, I can feel myself getting real excited for the sequel now! Yeah, me too! I really love the way she has developed, and I'm looking forward to see in what direction she will develop from this point.

    Now. I'm not really shocked that Keanu was the father of London's baby, taha! I don't know why, but I could sort of sense it in some weird way. (I'm just weird like that)
    I think this chapter was really emotionell. And when Shania attacked Arianna I couldn't help but feel sorry for her. She must feel so frustrated, lost and empty. The pain she's going through right now... I'm glad that she has friends to support her and comfort her. I'm curious to what Matt meant at the end: "He wanted the old Shania back but after what has happened to everyone. He doubt that everything was going to be the same because deep in his heart he knew everything was going to change."
    That made me so curious, and I love that your stories are so unpredictable and can take a complete different direction than what one interpret is implied in the story! :D
    Looking forward to the next chapter!
    April 4th, 2012 at 11:30pm
  • I did not see that coming and what the fuck is wrong with that bitch I mean really what the fuck is her problem. shes acting like no one died.
    April 4th, 2012 at 09:12pm
  • Oh my god! Poor London! That was so unexpected! O-O
    April 3rd, 2012 at 10:32pm
  • This story is getting really sad and it didn't help that I was listening to a sad song and why did London have to be pregnant WHY!?!?!?!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • I spent this night reading this story. My first reactions to the entire story: woah!

    At the first part of this story I was giggling and smiling like a mad because I love how she didn't give in, that she stood her ground and how stubborn she was. I also loved how easily Matt fell for her!
    Then I was super excited when I saw that I shared name with one of Shania's best friends! And I laughed every time I readh that name, because I reckon I pronounce it very differently than you do ;) so I had to laugh everytime I read that - the British accent, and all of a sudn skipping to Norwegian, haha!
    Then came the problems between Matt and Shania.. I really like her character. She's down to earth, easy to believe in, one can relate to her and there is something about her that just makes the reader keep on faling in love with her. I love how you present the characters and the issues in this story!
    Now. The last part. Wow. I can't believe it. She's dead. And the sorrow Faith, Rosalie and Shania is going through now is something I will never ever be able to imagine. Also, the traumas Shania must hve gotten from the shooting.. I'm glad that she has Matt, although she pushed him away from her now, something I can understand. The shock after the shooting + the shock from finding out her sister was pregnant.. There's no way she can walk away from that with no issues.

    That's also something I love! You seem to think about all of these things, and therefore the story is realistic! That's one of the reasons why I like your stories. You are an amazing writer as you put in all the things I like about stories, taha. Too bad I juetndiscovered this story though. Oh well.
    April 3rd, 2012 at 05:20pm
  • I just want to cry so much!
    London is gone, Shania lost one of her sisters and her mother has one of her daughters.
    I bet when they moved there, they didn't expect that to happened, losing another family member to violence.
    I am so glad that Shania is alright but she isn't the same as before.
    She lost a sister and few of her friends.
    I just really want to cry so bad because I can definitely feel Shania's anguish.
    I can't wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 05:21am
  • Very good update. I don't blame her for wanting to be with her family and no one else. I am SO glad that Keanu is back! She needed him the most. Can't wait for more!
    April 3rd, 2012 at 03:25am
  • This chapter was so heartbreaking. I cried throughout the whole thing. I can't even imagine what it would feel like to lose someone like your sister and have to see her die. I'm so glad that Shania is okay. I can't wait for more to find out what else happens.
    April 2nd, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • I cried throughout this whole chapter..it was very heartbreaking. I can't believe that London is gone,but I'm glad that Shania is okay. Right now she really needs her family the most after going through this tragic event.
    Great update :)
    April 2nd, 2012 at 09:00pm
  • That was a tear jerker. I felt so bad for Matt.
    YAY! :D haha I am glad to be missed.
    Can't wait for more!
    April 2nd, 2012 at 09:41am
  • THE FUCK I WAS THINKING THAT IT WAS ALL A DREAM BUT NO ALL OF IT WAS REAL!!!!!!!!!!!
    .........now im sad T.T
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:12am
  • Dx nuuuu
    Matt won't react well
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:06am
  • Soo sad. But good. I think they would understand but I have a feeling that Matt will push past the doctors and run into her room.
    April 2nd, 2012 at 06:02am