That Girl - Comments

Alex, you beautiful human being, thank you for running after her!!
And making her listen, and not backing down.

-kayt

I really hate Jack right now . Hahaha . Update soon . :)

I'm glad Lisa is nice in your story, People usual make her a bitch, jealous ex, I really like it that you didn't do that, I mean she seems like as nice person. Love the chapter, Alex and Fin are.... adorable together :)

Awwwwww, yay, to have someone not make Lisa out to be a frigid bitch is a refreshing surprise! I'm glad she was cool about everything and didn't through a monstrous bitch fit.
And not gonna lie... if those pork facts are real... uhm, I mean, I will never give up bacon or pork roll, but any other pork product... I am going to steer clear of from now on.
This was so cuteeeeeeeeee and I can't wait for Finley to finally meet Alex's parents, I feel like that shit show is going to be hilarious.
<3

Well, that was unexpected - to have Lisa in here but I agree with one of the comments above. It's good that you didn't make her the evil ex cuz god knows that's so overused and personally, to me, just plain annoying.

...but that pork thing. Even though I've never eaten it, nor am a big meat eater at all, that's... okay. HAHA. But, can't wait to see what happens next :D

I'm so tired that I thought, at that part where Alex is talking to Lisa and watching Finley talk on the phone, it said, "still watching Finley climb through the window."
Ahhhhhh, fail.
:)
Love the update though.

-kayt

This is so sweet. Lisa not being an evil ex is really good, cause those are such drama starters. Haha, so this is really good! I love it.

Yayyy :) I love this SO much, you have no idea :P
And thank you for not making Lisa a bitch, it annoys me when people do that in every single story. Cuz I've met her twice before, an she's actually really nice and fun to be around. (Before you ask, I met her at a party, it was her parents friend's 50th birthday or something, and the person whose birthday it was used to be our neighbors or something before I was born, so I ended up at the party with my parents. The other time I met her was after a concert when my friend and I went upto Alex and Jack to say hi. Jack knows who I am, too, because I saw him at the grocery store once and accidentally dropped a few packs of Oreos on his foot.)
Anyway, I digress.
I love this story, and thank you for not making Lisa a bitch, and also UPDATE SOON PLEASE :)

I love this story . :)

This is really nice and good and everything. Wow, Finley has got some moves, she's a true badass, should be in the hall of fame for badasses.

Awwwwwwwwwwww, this is just so gosh darn adorable.
I'm glad that Alex stopped her (in a weird way) from leaving and then they were kissing and it was just adsadfhadf... indescribable fangirling.

-kayt

I loved it . Happy birthday !

BIRTHDAY??? HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAME BUDDY!!!!!!
Anyway, I LOVE this chapter. I mean, they finally kissed, who wouldn't love it?
More soon pleaseeeee!!!

YES! yes yes yes yes.
And happy birfday :3

Fiiiiiiinally! I thought they'd never get any alone time.
Oh my goodness, they're so cute. I love that she can kick the shit out of him, no problems, haha.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY<3

Finally they can kiss without any interruptions!! Love the chapter, can't wait for the next one <3 <3

I only just started reading this, but I fucking love it. It's amazing, and you're an amazing writer :)

I love this so much, sorry I took so long to comment. : / But I love this so it's okay. :)

I really love this chapter. I really hope they can stay friends and that Finley's past won't mess things up.

She wants to be around him!
:D

-kayt