That Girl - Comments

If you dont want it to end make a sequel :] love the story

Oh, Finley, what are you doing?!?!
Honestly. Are you looking to get killed??
*le sigh*

-kayt

p.s. i don't want this to eeeeeeeeeeeend D:

I hate cliffhangers. Just to let you know.
I also hate when characters die. Just to also let you know. (hint, hint)
I loved this, though (minus the cliffhanger).
More soon please!!!!!

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Well, good boy, Jack, for making up.
But... I'm... not liking where this is going. One, I know my heart is already breaking for Alex. Two, well... whatever Finley is planning, I'm ready to call her dumb for it- just the ideas going through my head. AKJDHGSK of course they would be in town right when Alex finally gets the girl. Poorbby<3

If this isn't the right time to Alex everything I don't know when is!!! <3

Oh, God, she's gonna go find them herself, isn't she?
More soon pleaseeeee!!!

They can't leave! No, no, no, they're finally getting somewhere. D;
I swear, I need Finley to kick some aaaaaaass.
And good ol' Jack! I knew he'd come aroundd. They're so cute with their bromance.
Oh and btw, totally already subscribed to your new story. <3

Finley, you're stupid and wonderful. Please, don't die.
Can't wait for more.

-kayt

Don't let her leaveeee ! Thank you . :3

oh my motherfucking god. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE THIS SOOOONNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WHAT IS WALKER GONNA TELL THEM!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

oh geez the clu cant even handle me right now!

pleazzzzz update soonnnnn reallll soon!!!!

Her dad is just as confusing as a teenage boy, except his motives are kinda different.
(Sorry if that made no sense, it was the only thing that I can currently compare it too.)

I LOVE THIS. SO SO MUCH.
and one small thing: I don't know if this was on purpose and I just dont understand it, it said "her stomach dropped in her stomach" or something (toward the end when her dad told her that something came up) and it just didn't make sense to me.
Anywho, more soon please!!!!!

Poor Fin. I don't get her dad. He wants her to make friends, but he doesn't want her hanging out with Alex. She should agree with being Alex GF though, the kinda act like a couple :) Update soon please <3

It's so cute.
I absolutely love Alex and Finley together.
I can't wait to find out what happened!!!
More sooooooooon!

-kayt

She can't leave again!

HER DAD CAN FUCK OFF OKAY.
Dude, how did I just know she was gonna correct something about the Disney movies? But I love Alex's little disappointment when he didn't think about the girlfriend thing.

But, what's come up? :O

Aaaw come on Fin, give the poor guy a chance!

Damn it, JACK! That was not coool, they were having such a good time.
I think that he needs to mind his own business and Finley and Alex need to just fall in loooooove.
fadskfjladsjfladsjlfasdd <--- My frustration.

THIS IS SO INTENSE. I love you, Alex. That was just amazing.
BUT GODDAMNIT JACK.
It's sad; this is the one story where I actually don't like Jack.

I'm really liking this! It's written very well! can't wait till your next update! :)