Psyche - Comments

I'm in love with this story.

omg you like best coast they're great and I loved this chapter

Oh my gosh that last chapter was amazing. I think this is the chapter that made me really like Jean you know? Because everything he does basically revolves around Jamie, and even though he'd long since stopped thinking about Alexandra you could really tell this time that he relt absolutely nothing for her. 'Cause you said that he sat down in the booth with them, Alexandra had pit stains (fucking hillarious) and Jamie looked unfocused. But the only thing he thought about was Jamie. And when he said he needed to talk to him i almost died of happiness.
But wait, I'm getting a head of myself.
I really love when they get to the club (i think you said it was a club) where Jean is playing and you tell us that Jamie is nervous. And it's like, 'okay he's nervous so what' but then Alex (yes i am indeed shortening her name) says "Hey if you're gonna throw up let me know so i can point you in the direction of the girl who keeps pushing me. She's got nice make-up though." I busted out laughing so hard my mom looked at me with the 'wtf' look. Cause then you realize how his face must look.
Back to what i was saying before. I was so happy when Jean took Jamie outside to talk, I was just like "Squee!" and then when he gets all up in his face, (Or at least that's what i pictured) and says. "Do I still make you nervous?"
Oh my fuck.
He was so sexy in that moment, i wanted to ravish him. But unfortunatly he belonds to Jamie *sigh*
And then the best part.....they kissed! Jamie was so cute after that stuttering and asking if he liked him LIKE THAT and then i fell in love with Jean again cause he was so sure with his answer. And yeah, this comment is freakishly long and random but i hope i got my point across. I don't really have any bad critique.....so i hope you feel spiffy haha.
Peace

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They kiiiiiseeeed!!!!

this is so great

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I still love the uniqueness of how the story is written and I loved the update. they kissed...or Jean kissed Jamie. tehehe. (:

Noooo. why haven't you written more? I'm addicted and I swear when i looked and saw that 31 was the last chapter i died a little inside, you just created a whole 'nother world that i got sucked into and never ever ever wanted to leave. Your writing style is really amazing, it almost seems like it should be in first person, but it's not. I like that.
You really connected us (your readers) to Jamie. He's soft spoken and sweet and nervous without seeming like a girl, some people do that in their stories, make it seem like just cause they are gay means they have to act like a girl. When in reality, most gay guys don't act like that. So i like it how even though he is most definitly not a normal person, people would be able to connect. And i mean that because he's got so many issues and has to take those pills and everything, not because he's gay. I also love that you made him an artist....just cause i think that's amazingly sexy haha.
Jean sort of confused me at first, i couldn't really decide if i liked him, or hated him. He seemed really arrogant and narcacistic (I'm pretty sure i spelled that wrong) when he was using Jamie to get to Alexandra. But then he started liking (I'm pretty sure) Jamie and i was just like AAAWWWWW you are sooooo cute. And he seems really normal and not girly too so i like that. Cause he seems like a real man haha.
From the moment i saw (read about) Alexandria I loved her. The outfit you had her wearing, SUPER FLY. I always wished i could be as amazing as you made her but alas.....I'm not. *Sigh* But anyways her character is really what brings this whole thing together. Without her it would be like something was missing....and that would be sad. Because i really like this story.
Jamie's aunt seems really oblivious to everything and it makes me really mad. I can't for the life of me figure out what Zacky did to the kid but i'm pretty sure it was rape.....pardon me if i'm giving something away.
Anyways, i saw this one authors not where you said spiffy. And i was like HOLY MONKEY FEATHERS, she said spiffy. Cause i always say that and then people look at me like I'm a total Tart and I go :O.
Peace.

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I love your story its different from most of them on here its simple sweet and to the point no long un needed paragraphs only enought to know whats going on and to set the mood i love it!! i want to learn more about jamie tho he seems like a real interesting person.

Havent seen Alexandra as much
Stilll confused about Zach
Jean is scred becuz of his feelings 4 Jamie
and Jamie is scared 4 his feelings 4 Jean..
and thts
how Helpless...cees it..

Awsome as usuall, I love your character development. And i really like all three characters ;)

AWSOME UPDATE, nice and long :) I'm getting that there is somthing going on with Zach that we don't know about...oooh....

I'M STILL CONFUSED!!!!!

omg yay I love when you update this story it's so good

Ok, so I've been reading this story for a long time, and it's definately my favourite on mibba at the moment. I'm totally involved, and I regret not commenting on the amazingness you capture.

I think you've actually written the different POV's so well and your writing is so fluid, which I love.
Also, the layout is nice and clean and readable.

Keep it up! :)

great story i love it

KEEP IT UP!!!
Jean likes hm....how CUTE!

Awwwww i know how he feels
ive been on medz since i was 11

Why doesnt he like Zach?