'Jamie suddenly isn’t that other ethnic-looking person, besides Jean; among the sea of white students they call a class. He isn’t just that emo-looking guy or that smart kid. He’s someone who bothers Jean and Jean needs to deal with it somehow, someway.'
KEEP ON GOING!!! like i said, it really roxs, it's very unique in the way that u can feel wut jamie is without actually being with him all the time, i like it
I can't believe this story doesn't have pages of comments!
It's really wonderfully different - you're writing is fluid and descriptive, yet it leaves you wanting more. Your characters and storyline is original, not full of overused cliches like every other story on mibba. The layout is nice and clean, which adds to this stories charm.
Thanks for writing and uploading this, update soon! :)