This Rhys character intrigues me. I know you wouldn't have introduced him to the story without meaning behind it. This past chapter also makes me wonder what exactly will happen between Addison and Andy. Addison is a logical thinker, anyone would feel that if Andy really wanted anything to do with him he would have kept in touch, especially if throughout the whole story Addison is mentioning the ways he's been trying to keep in contact with Andy. I adore how real you made Addison. Everything from his thoughts to his personality.He just comes off as a real person, not a character in a story. That's a gift, not many people are able to actually able to come across 'real' characters. I honestly cannot wait to see where this story goes.
As always I really like it and I can't wait for more. I got all excited when I saw it was 2 new chapters to read. Really love Addison's character. he just seems genuinely real and nice.
This story makes me a wee bit excited. And nervous. Cause I can see how this story might wind up really good... Or reaaally bad. (As in a sad way.) I'm curious to see how you'll go with it. (:
well damn that was an interesting chapter and curse you for ending it there!!!! oh and is it bad that i threw my fist in the air and shook it when i read how i have the most commetns so far? no? yes? maybe so?
i really love this story :o. i enjoy reading it and awesomr that you updated c:<. mawhaha i love it , its well written and your quite an amazing writer ^-^. ♥ Addison is :O
anyways i'll be waiting for update <(._.<). keep it up ^-^
I really enjoy this story. Addison seems so real. I feel like I'd be able to just find him on the internet and talk to him, not like he's a character in a story. I enjoy it. I like how them meeting is internet based and how Addison is having mixed feelings about everything. It makes it all seem more real. I also like the way you write. It's a bit jumpy, but I enjoy it. Overall I enjoy this story a lot.