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  • obscure-

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    Another great chapter. I like how Addison is so completely comfortable with Rhys. It causes me to smile. They're so cute. Reena seems nice too. Though, she doesn't seem to have much purpose in the story other than being Rhys' sister. I honestly wasn't expecting Rhys to have a twin sister, that was a twist. I like how you described them both in a way of comparing them sense you never really said anything about how Rhys looks beforehand. All you said was his eyes and his septum piercing. I can't wait to find out what Andy has to say, he seems to really want things to work out between him and Addison which is a good thing. I like that Andy's trying so hard. Addison seems timid--completely frightened by the idea of getting close to him again. I don't really blame him, after what happened, I would feel the same.
    Overall, great chapter, can't wait to read the next.
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • bloodyvengeance

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    Damn cliff hangers don't like em' but the drama that might come will make up for it I bet :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:04pm
  • The Mini Monster

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    I hate cliff hangers.
    I really do.
    But I guess, karma really is a bitch.
    Cause I leave cliff hangers all the time.
    Fuck.

    I love this story.
    Carry on, ma'am.
    -salutes-

    And you should wait start you story idea until this is over.
    Because I, selfishly, want you to spend your time on this.
    >.>

    <.<
    July 25th, 2011 at 12:24pm
  • Mr. Patrick Star

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    I like Rhys before, but now that he's got a twin?!?! He's gotten more awesomer!
    Good update,
    And once again the dreaded words,
    More!More!More!More!More!
    Even though it's just been updated
    Original fiction Now please! xD
    July 25th, 2011 at 12:15pm
  • silhouette dreams.

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    More please {:
    July 25th, 2011 at 10:34am
  • Purple Nightmares

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    I'm going to have to say, this chapater is a cliff hanger, i leave's me hungry for more!
    About that new story i say add it now, only if you can handle it XD
    July 25th, 2011 at 10:29am
  • zombie heart

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    Wow. This is amazing. No lies. My heart was sad for Addison many times. But at least Andy is trying to talk it out with him. BTW, I love Ryse(I think that's how you spell it, and I'm sorry if it's wrongXD) He seems like a very nice friend. I feel like when they leave from the concert they'll keep in touch;) I love this and I'm excited for the next chapter because I really really wanna know what happens between Andy and Addison(BTW Addison is an adorable nameXD)
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Page claim
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    So I'm acctually not 90% asleep this time.
    I love this alot and Rhys is adorable and awesome.
    (Shame on andy)
    lol...
    Anyways...
    Update?
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    So I'm acctually not 90% asleep this time.
    I love this alot and Rhys is adorable and awesome.
    (Shame on andy)
    lol...
    Anyways...
    Update?
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    well a. slightly sad that chapter was short but more so b. EXCITED FOR UPDATE!!!!
    i like Reena. she seems rather crazyish...if that makes any sense.
    i wonder what's gonna happen between Andy and Addison!!!!
    ack! i keep wanting to put Andi instead of Andy! >.<
    curse my nickname for being the same as his!!!!!!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • Mr. Patrick Star

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    Mmmmmm I wonder how this'll turn out!
    But so far you're doing an awesome job at writing it.
    And now I must say.
    More!More!More!More!
    Even though you just updated.
    July 25th, 2011 at 06:21am
  • obscure-

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    I really cannot wait to see where this goes. All the problems with Andy, it makes me wonder how things are going to turn out.
    July 25th, 2011 at 05:33am
  • Purple Nightmares

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    well you don't have to beg really XD
    but i understand.
    i really liked this chapter :D
    July 24th, 2011 at 07:23pm
  • Durch-Den-Monsun-87

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    i feel the need to yell out DUN DUN DUUUNNNNN!!!!
    but only because Ryktor(sp?) is going to go talk to Andy. I feel things are going to explode or get very ver very VERY interesting at least. i like Rhys...he's cute and sweet! *hugs him*
    I LOVERS YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!
    yeah i know i'm weird...
    July 24th, 2011 at 04:42pm
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    <3 this...
    *le sniffs*
    Damn...
    4:18 am and i'm not tired....
    Wait never mind.
    *le closes eyes and hits submit*
    July 24th, 2011 at 11:19am
  • arishikun

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    my baby is hurt *hugs* it be ok
    July 24th, 2011 at 10:50am
  • Aurielle

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    I get so excited when i see a new chapter out. It's really good and I can't wait to see how it develops more.
    July 24th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • Purple Nightmares

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    more more more its so interesting.
    oh and if you ever need help with the story,
    i often get to talk to andy, dork.
    if you don't believe me then i'm sorry but still i can't wait for your next update.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 07:07pm
  • SexyPleaseTextMe_xD

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    My favorite story on Mibba!

    PS.Love You Tobi!
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:07pm