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  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Thank you :D

    I have problems with grammar, may have to get another person to check it for me

    xxx
    June 19th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • Skylight Madness

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    So, this sounds very creepy. Stalkers freak me out in general. Your layout is hard to read though because white on black tends to blur together after a while and it just hurts. This story has great potential if you add more description, break up your paragraphs, and be sure to check your grammar (:
    June 19th, 2011 at 05:31pm
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Thank you :D xxx
    June 19th, 2011 at 05:01pm
  • Nowhere Kids Voice

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    this story got me really creeped out lol which is good since it's written in the point of view of a stalker
    keep up the good work :D
    June 19th, 2011 at 04:50pm
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Thank you :D I will xxx
    June 19th, 2011 at 02:08pm
  • Little

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    This is a great story. Please update soon!
    June 19th, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Lmao!

    Oh you shall see :D

    xxxx
    June 19th, 2011 at 01:12pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    What no! Dont leave me like that! What did she mean but that?!?!?!?
    Oh, gosh you already got me obssesed with this and it just started .
    June 19th, 2011 at 01:02pm
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    I will! Thank you!
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    June 19th, 2011 at 12:15pm
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    Love at first read! ♥
    You must update soon!
    June 19th, 2011 at 09:44am
  • Soulless.Temptation

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    Than you :D
    XxxXxxX
    June 18th, 2011 at 12:21pm
  • emo_vamp210

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    wow it really really good i like it
    June 18th, 2011 at 12:15pm
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