Gravity Don't Mean Too Much to Me - Comments

  • JickNonas

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    This is definitely an interesting story, not a huge My Chemical Romance fan but I did like the story. I love the characters and you as a writer definitely helped me get into the story, even though I'm not big on mcr. Good job! Sad to see you haven't really updated much! xx
    December 6th, 2016 at 06:08am
  • KilljoyBekah

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    @ nyctophilia
    thank you :) not sure when I'll next update, but I'm so bored at the moment (i'm on holiday from work) so I might give writing a shot again
    September 2nd, 2016 at 03:56pm
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    Aww man this story is such a roller coaster of emotions. I'm so happy the baby is okay and that all the stuff with little brat Vicky got settled. It's crazy but I can actually picture Lyn Z and Gerard acting this way with Bandit in real life, so protective and caring. You made it seem really realistic of their family values. I hope it is still updated because it's a great read.
    May 9th, 2016 at 06:01am
  • EchelonWiLControl

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    Well I am a fan of My Chem so this story definitely had me curious so I was excited to read it. I looooove it. I love the connection that Bandit has to the music. He connection to music is definitely the best part of the story. Bandit is definitely a great character. I'm subscribed. Keep up the good work. Again, love the story very much.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 09:39pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Comment swap this is very good ad loved it a lot, there was a food plot and love the characters and thought you did very wel for it, mcr aren't my favourite and I don't really know them but they fitted well into this story well done xxx
    October 5th, 2014 at 01:34pm
  • Maddi;

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    I think that my favorite thing about this story was that Bandit actually had depth. She wasn't just some fan who loved their music. She had real emotions and feelings and a deep connection to that music that made her seem like a real person. Even in the first chapter you talk about her emotional connection to the music and it continues to be a key point in the story after that. I loved your ability to write a well thought out character.
    November 10th, 2013 at 03:25pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    @ sassygee.
    aha, thank you! I hope to update this soon, I just haven't been able to write since the band ended, I dunno, it's like major writer's block, but I've gotten back to it now so hopefully soon ^_^ Glad I could make someone laugh :P
    August 6th, 2013 at 03:18pm
  • sassygee.

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    Good god this is perfection.

    "He was smirking as Cherry asked; "What's a mood swing?"

    "Can I have one?" piped up Lily.

    "No, you can't have one! I asked first!" Cried Cherry, and Bandit giggled at their assumption."

    I nearly pissed myself. Thanks for making my night. xD The story was beautiful. I really enjoyed it. C: <3
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:30am
  • unicornosaurus

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    awesome <3 - <3
    May 21st, 2013 at 04:37am
  • shesmywynonna

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    I'm so glad that the baby survived!! Lovin' the name, and how he got it! Love this story! I think you should dwell a little into B's future, especially with the newborn baby! Update soon!
    November 24th, 2012 at 04:42am
  • KilljoyBekah

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    @ Permanent_Jetlag Aw thank you, yeah I will be this weekend hopefully, had alot going on lately and had writers block with this story, but I'll try and write some more soon! :) I've been focusing on other stories on here too, so it'll probs be this weekend I update!
    November 13th, 2012 at 06:18pm
  • Permanent_Jetlag

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    I am, legit in love with this story. Are you going to update anytime soon?
    November 13th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • CultureCreator

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    Hola!
    I'm here because the Comment Swap gods deemed it so! I'm a MCR fan. Not a die-hard fan, but a fan nonetheless. I thought this story was really fantastic! There aren't a lot of really interesting MCR fics here, especially Bandit ones like the comment-er below me mentioned. Your grammar is excellent, the layout is just really spiffy (I don't usually comment on layouts, but I really REALLY liked this one), and just the content in general is spectacular! Keep up the good work!
    November 12th, 2012 at 06:33am
  • Laobows!

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    (Comment swap) Seeing as i'm a MCR fan, i was instantly excited to read your story. There are a lot of Bandit stories on here but I think yours is one of the best i've read. I'm going to be honest, I haven't read the whole story but I defiantly will :) This story is so well written and like someone mentioned, your grammar is great! I can't wait to read the rest of the story and I will be commenting again lol! Oh and also subscribing!!!!!
    August 18th, 2012 at 04:44pm
  • ShanaeNayy

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    I'm not usually into MCR, but after reading the first few chapters of your story, I must say this is extremely cute. Bandit is the perfect kid and you've written her exactly the way a kid her age would be. The way you mix the storyline between Bandit's and the grown up's, it almost feels like a reality show. All in all, great story and great writing!
    August 17th, 2012 at 04:46am
  • living-lucid

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    [comment swap] Congratulations for having an original fan fiction! I'm really digging the daughter perspective, it's a very different and great read. You've got a well-rounded vocabulary and impeccable grammar, something that seems to escape most people on here. Go you!
    August 16th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • china-doll

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    Well hellllo. I've come here via comment swap.
    I've got to say, I haven't read MCR fanfic in awhile, so I'm a little rusty. Regardless, this is still a great story. I absolutely love Bandit's character and how close she is with Gerard. I've only read a couple of chapters so far, but I'm gonna go ahead on continue with this. Your writing style is very interesting and I couldn't find any grammar mistake or errors anymore. You've done a really good job at this. Keep it up and good luck with the rest!

    -Jess xx
    August 15th, 2012 at 09:24pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    This chapter was so good!!!! I loved it!!
    I feel bad for Bandit and Frank, poor guys.
    I hope the baby'll make it!!!
    Update soon!!!
    And Small Petunia of the Galaxy is so cute!!
    August 15th, 2012 at 01:08am
  • XTeamSammiX

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    I really do like this story. I usually don't like it when you get into the famly stuff in stories but im acctually cool with htis one. I kinda wish gerard was my father, I love the way you portrait the characters. I am going to recommend this story and probably subscribe to it. :) I really do like this story
    July 27th, 2012 at 10:07pm
  • firearnok

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    Ok, I recommended your story, and subscribe, but I'm going to need to stop reading for today, because I've got to continue writing my Frerards, and your fic makes me feel guilty for liking Frerard x) Like, it makes me feel like I should stop the Frerard thing immediately and I don't want to ._.
    July 27th, 2012 at 11:30am