Gravity Don't Mean Too Much to Me - Comments

  • hidans_hoe

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    (Comment swap!)
    I'm not a My Chemical Romance fan but that doesn't really matter. I love the title. It's intriguing. The summary is short and sweet and I like that. The description of the song's meaning to Bandit is beautiful. I can totally relate. I saw no grammar or spelling mistakes. Awesome job!
    July 20th, 2012 at 01:51am
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    [here from comment swap, only read the first two chapters]
    This story is really cute so far. The banner is gorgeous and the colors are nice, though the white font is a little intense and tough for me to read, but I've got crap vision, so whatever. I haven't read MCR fic in ages but this is super nice. You get the family dynamic down nicely and your writing style is nice. My only issues are with some use of the passive voice and little bits where it sounds slightly awkward. Still, I like Bandit's character a lot and Lindsey seems like a really wonderful yet stressed mother. Reading the comments, I can tell there's some good stuff to come, so I may continue later if I find time. Good work!
    July 20th, 2012 at 12:56am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    Oh dear! I.. Wtf? What I really like is that she said really?! Right before the pain kicked in. I'm happy they won the case they were right all along. Hahah TAKE THAT YOU LITTLE BITCH!
    I hope Lyndsey and the baby are fine! It better be a boy!
    And ugh this is too fucking intense!
    I have nothing further to say but that I look like a fishy with no water.
    - Jenn.
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:30pm
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    Oh dear! I.. Wtf? What I really like is that she said really?! Right before the pain kicked in. I'm happy they won the case they were right all along. Hahah TAKE THAT YOU LITTLE BITCH!
    I hope Lyndsey and the baby are fine! It better be a boy!
    And ugh this is too fucking intense!
    I have nothing further to say but that I look like a fishy with no water.
    - Jenn.
    July 19th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    I hope that Vicky slips up everytime she talks. Maybe Gerard will use what she said about why she was bullying B against her.That should prove her dramatizing.
    July 17th, 2012 at 07:01pm
  • Frankiiestein

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    Fudge man I hate it when i accidentally press enter.

    Anyway, If they were smart cops or FBI agents then they would use a lie detector on that little brat. Ugh I would punch her in the face and tell her not to cry and be grown up about it.

    I love this story but it just gets me mad with everything that is happening. Hope you update soon (:
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:23am
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    Fudge man I hate it when i accidentally press enter.

    Anyway, If they were smart cops or FBI agents then they would use a lie detector on that little brat. Ugh I would punch her in the face and tell her not to cry and be grown up about it.

    I love this story but it just gets me mad with everything that is happening. Hope you update soon (:
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:23am
  • Frankiiestein

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    v Same. If they were real cops or FBI
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • YoungandLoadedKid

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    I just found this story and I don't know how I did, but I sure as hell am glad.
    That stupid fucking little ugly fucking 12 year old wanna be 17 year old bitch! UGH I can't stand her! She's just a jealous prick! Bandit doesn't get everything she wants, she gets treated the same way you do when she's in school. So you wanna pick on her because she has a family?! It isn't her fucking fault that her family loves her and yours doesn't!
    UGH I swore that when I have kids I will never let that happen to them. And just reading how this is taking a toll on not only Bandit and the family, but Frank and his family. Now Gerard is getting called a child beater? UGH.
    This story is amazing, I can't wait till you update again.
    I hope Lyndsey has a boy and they can call him something fucking unique like Phoenix or something.
    I have like a bad/good feeling about the trial next chapter.
    Oh I also love the description you have in this movie. And how anyone can relate to this story because you are touching real life things that happen to families and kids....
    This was a long ass comment.
    But yeah can't wait!
    - Jenn.
    July 12th, 2012 at 04:06am
  • shesmywynonna

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    Man, I would've been such a bitch if I were in Lindsey's sistuation. Hopefully Gee doesn't end up in jail, and Vicky finally gets what she deserves.
    Can't wait for the next update darlin'! :D
    July 11th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • JillGeeRAWRd

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    I just saw this chapter. This story is actually very good!! Update soon?
    July 11th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    How can she say Bandit takes it for granted? She's just a jealous bitch >.>
    But that outburst of hers can be used to Gerard's advantage >:D
    Loved the chapter, still wanting to kill Vicky
    Update soon! <3
    June 12th, 2012 at 04:42am
  • shesmywynonna

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    LOVED THE CHAPTER :DDD
    but ugh i woudn't have blamed Bandit if she decided to seriously injure Vicky even more, cause even though I'm not violent, i would've fucked that bitch up xD
    Ugh i hate how she did that to Frank, that stupid bitch.
    Ross and Bandit are so fucking adorable :3
    Update soon!!!
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    HA karma bit Vicky right in the ass! Ugh I just want to punch her in the face for trying to secretly hurt Bandit like that, she never did anything to her >.<
    I love how Frank loves pizza so much it's entertaining xD
    Loved the chapter, update soon :D
    May 17th, 2012 at 10:46pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    First of all, I squeeled when I got the update <3
    Second, I love the chapter so muuuuch and I'm so glad you updated, no matter how late it was. It could have been two years, and I still would've been so excited :3
    Third, yes, the great news of Miles Iero! if you want to add him into the story without editing all the chapters, I say you should just add Jamia's pregnancy in the middle of Lindsey or sometime after. :)
    And last, update soon! :3
    May 17th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • shesmywynonna

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    you should really update this soon, it'd make me smile :3
    March 4th, 2012 at 03:12am
  • xmcrxshotgun

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    awwww it's so cuutee ahhh so adorable update plese oh and I'm so subscribing to this
    February 5th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • xmcrxshotgun

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    awwww it's so cuutee ahhh so adorable update plese oh and I'm so subscribing to this
    February 5th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    Aw i squeeked when i saw you updated this! :D i looooove this story soooo much <3333 Haha the shower part was hilariouuuuuuuuuus! Can't wait to see what happens with the doctor :) Update soon :D
    December 17th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    WHY AM I THE ONLY ONE COMMENTING TODAY?! GAH THE CHAPTERS WERE SO BEAUTIFUL <33333333 ah, i thought she was gonna tell him </3 To be quite honest, Lindsey and Gee remind me of my parents with my bullies xP I wonder what Frankie's go to say :o maybe something to do with Cherry and Lily? :) this story is one of the best ones i read <3 update soon :D
    October 30th, 2011 at 02:12am