Stories Yet To Unfold - Comments

Update, this is amazing <3 - <3

please update! i read the whole story and it is really really awesome!!!!

OMG you haven't updated in forever... Please update again soon!!!

wow, her dad is horrible!
i'm glad she had jeff and the boys((:

Awwwwwwww, I love that bit at the end about Jeff. That sewed my heart right up. :,)

-kayt

Loved the update. I can't believe her dad!! I feel bad for her now:(
Update soon?

I just started reading this, and i love it!

Whoa!! I didn't know Rian actually had a brother D: I guess we do learn something new every day.. haha
I love the layout by the way.
I never really thought about what she'd look like..I guess medium length curly dark brown hair and average height and weight but I didn't really think much about it after that haha.
I loved this chapter!! It was amazing!!! I can't believe she actually found out what her father look's like!! Hopefully it'll go good now, but I don't want her to leave the guys! haha anyways, enough rambling..umm, update soon??
PS: I'm gonna go read your other story now :)

I imagined her with medium length brown curly hair, fair skinned, average weight and average hight

HOLY FUCK I LOVED THIS CHAPTER ! please please continue

To be honest, I picture Melissa to be the girl at the top....
I love this new layout though!!! :D
But yay! Melissa's father!!

-kayt

oh gooooooooooooooooooooooooooddddddddd!

Omg just update!!:) this is so good and I've been waiting forever!:)

The banner looks really cool. :) I like the colors. As well as I like the layout :)

The summary was very well made, as well. It seemed to explain most of the plot, which is something I like :). It's interesting and has a nice introduction. At the end of it, it left me very curious as to what it's going to be about. Like, father? Unknown? What's happening? I can't wait to read more :)

I'm the 69th comment.... ;) perverted teenaged mind taking over! Please update again soon! I love this and I need a new chapter!

You need to fucking update! I'm hooked on this story

Update please!

I love this chapter!! haha Jack is such an idiot, but that's what I love about him so much. haha...anyways update soon!!

I'm honestly obsessed with this story and have a mini freak out every time you update!!! Keep it going, sugar! xoxo

This story Is so fucking amazing. Update soon! 