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  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Ooooooooooooh, fuck.
    :O

    -kayt
    December 21st, 2011 at 11:37pm
  • halfmoonkid

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    I love this story!! :D
    Can't wait for more. haha
    December 21st, 2011 at 11:00pm
  • LiesThatTurnToTruth

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    I love it! Can't wait for the next update! 8)
    December 13th, 2011 at 07:58am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    AN UPDATE. OH MY GAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWW.
    Okay anyway. It was super cute. (':
    Jack is such a bad influence. Aha--well that is if Melissa ends up drinking . . .
    Curious about the drama coming up.
    I hope an update comes soon so I don't have to wait that long xDDD
    October 2nd, 2011 at 07:30am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Cute chapter. :)

    -kayt
    October 2nd, 2011 at 02:45am
  • Elle_Kimberly

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    The dancing chapter was funny. I tried picturing them dancing in my head haha. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    August 19th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • ReadyToFall22

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    GAHHH i LOVE THIS STORY!
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:26am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    Awwww Melissa was able to stay and sing with them. flndslkn
    That was so nice. :DD

    I can't wait for the next chapter. ;D I wanna see how this tour unfolds.
    August 7th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    awesome chapter :)
    i can't wait for the drama!!! xD
    I love love drama... ;D
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    August 7th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Cute. :) Glad she's having fun.
    Can't wait for drama now.

    -kayt
    August 6th, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • Elle_Kimberly

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    I like your new username :) Good chapter! Little things that you put in that chapter made me really curious for what's next like Alex patting Mel's knee, Mel looking at Zack before falling asleep, and Mel cuddling with Alex. It's just little things like that, that I like a lot in the story. Don't really know if they mean anything thought haha.
    August 2nd, 2011 at 12:39am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Cute. :)
    I like the username.

    -kayt
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:07am
  • came out swinging

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    i like the new username, oh yes.

    and melly is so cute, oh my gosh.
    August 1st, 2011 at 05:02am
  • halfmoonkid

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    Yayy, tour!! :D haha I loved this chapter!
    Update soon, please??
    Oh and love the new username:D haha
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:57am
  • enamored

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    Ah tour will be awesome, and eventful with the All Time Low boys haha ;D update soon please? x
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:46am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    tour's*
    sorry...i had to correct that because it really annoys me when people don't use apostrophes correctly...
    so yea...
    sorry about his c:
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:43am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    nice chapter :)
    tours gonna be awesome! :D
    and maybe some blossoming romance? ;D
    and i really like the new username :)
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    August 1st, 2011 at 04:42am
  • Elle_Kimberly

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    I love when characters are old souls because I'm one myself :) I really liked how this chapter was pretty chill and laid back.
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:57am
  • Kinkeh Dinosaurs

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    That was a cute chapter. :3
    I like how their relationship is progressing, it's ... I want to say cute again but I won't. I'll go with... adorable...? Yeah, I dunno. Aha.
    Update soon! :D
    July 25th, 2011 at 07:18am
  • enamored

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    Jeff seems like he would be a good parent/guardian... I really like this story :3 x
    July 24th, 2011 at 09:41pm
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