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  • hachie

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    Wow now that is a lot of info right there in this chapter.
    Zacky never wanted to hurt Kayla since he promised her but he still did it.
    And he kept her away from her friends and family because he thought she might tell them about how he is hurting her.
    I believe he was afraid that she would leave him and he is deeply on love with her.
    Good thing Kayla called him before Zacky did something drastic.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 24th, 2011 at 02:39am
  • soapy

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    so i've managed to read all of extra credit in the pass two days and just wow, it is an incredible story with so much emotion. the sequel has taken a 180 with how zacky is acting, he is so different and harsh. i can't believe she is still with him after this, i suppose only her love to him keeps her with him. gosh its so sad so see him being so cruel to her after how he promised he'd never be like that again in extra credit. your writing is really good and i felt so sad reading the second chapter, especially when she begged him to not and he looked at her with guilt. i am really excited to see where this all goes and if zacky will ever go back to how he was or if he ends up going to far and destroying kayla completely.
    September 21st, 2011 at 03:04am
  • morbid;

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    I legit cried! Zacky is so different! He used to be so kind and now all he cares about is sex and abuse!
    But I still love this story and Extra Credit too ;D I'm just hooked already. I k ew that the story was going to be dark and about abuse when I made a subscription so I shouldn't say anything about it! Just one small comment-- you should make a chapter in Zack's POV bc I wanna know what the fuck he is thinking! Please?! Just think about it!
    I love you!
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    September 20th, 2011 at 07:08am
  • LeahVengeance

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    This story will be great, that reactioon from Zacky caught entirely my atention, though I'm not sure if it was a good or a bad thing. I feel weird reading this, l found myself being afraid of something, like, feeling the same thing she might be feeling, you know?
    September 20th, 2011 at 04:44am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Poor Kayla :(
    At least Zack was able to stop when she pain..I wonder if this will make him realize that he's hurting Kayla.
    September 20th, 2011 at 03:45am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    stupid Zacky... >:(
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    September 20th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • x-LozziePop-x

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    I feel so so sorry for Kayla already...Zacky is so horrible :(
    September 19th, 2011 at 11:38pm
  • hachie

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    Thank goodness Kayla stopped Zacky before he went through with what he planned.
    Because forcing that on her would be extremely painful and the only it would work is if Kayla has complete trust in Zacky but at the moment she doesn't.
    She knows that he is only after his own pleasure.
    I really so believe that the way Zacky has changed is due to the text that her ex sent her and Zacky doesn't like it when an ex is sending his girlfriend very graphic texts.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 19th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • littlepinkfox

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    Well, at least Kayla got Zacky to stop :)

    That's a start.

    Great update, love the story.
    September 19th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • adam driver.

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    good chapter! it's sad that he's changed so much & I hope that he can change again... & even though the abuse is kinda twisted, it was kinda hot too. Lol call me a freak, I don't care... I love this story already! now let's just hope Zachary starts to fall in-love with her again! I'm hoping for some Zack point-of-view chapters. I'm interested to know what he's thinking!

    :) can't wait for the next update.
    September 19th, 2011 at 04:18pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    There's some hope for him still XD I hope he can work things out with her in the end.
    September 19th, 2011 at 02:13pm
  • hmc09

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    I really like that you're doing a story that is happening to a lot of women (and men) around the world all the time. I don't know what I'd do if that happened to me because you say you'd up and leave them as soon as they hit you but if that actually happened you might end up staying because you feel as if you hav nobody else.

    Anyway I'll finish my rant. Great but sad update.
    September 19th, 2011 at 01:43pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    So sad already. This story is definitely gonna be depressing.
    September 18th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • standingintheneon

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    This had me bawling. GOD DAMN IT ZACHARY!!!!! D:
    I really want to hear it from Zacky's point of view and know what the fuck he's thinking. Why after a year is he abusing her again? Why did he change? It's a complete dynamic switch. He's always been dynamic, but now ... it's the bad kind. Fuck. FUCK. fuck. Fuckmylife. RRRAAAAAH!
    Okay, now that I've embarrassed myself....

    I think I'll just go read one of the sexy scenes from Extra Credit that makes my mind do this:
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    Yeah, it's a fucking Jonas Brother. Do I care? No. Because I can leave fancy gifs to make you laugh tooooo.
    God, I almost don't want to read more, but I'm officially addicted. ALREADY.
    September 15th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    I hate Zacky. Why can't he see what he's become? Ranting
    September 15th, 2011 at 03:10pm
  • adam driver.

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    :( ugh, Zack. why? Haha.

    I love this story so much... I hope that Zack changes.
    September 15th, 2011 at 10:31am
  • Lola the Kid

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    Ahh! This beginning makes me nervous for what'll happen in the future. I can't wait to see how this goes. I hope Zacky figures out that he's being an ass hole and needs some serious help. I hope Kayla can find him that help!(:
    September 15th, 2011 at 05:47am
  • CharmedLuna

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    You were right. It started off bad. I hope she gets out of it though, but I know it's going to be hard. She loves him, but hurting the one you love is never truly love. I hope Zacky realizes what he's doing is stupid.
    September 15th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • morbid;

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    It makes me sad to know that Zack is being a douche bag after such a good time last year! What a dick, I WANT THINGS TO GET BETTER
    hah I know the story will be dark but I'll read it...I wanna know what will happen ;3
    Update soon and message me back, love <3
    September 15th, 2011 at 01:43am
  • pixie dusttt.

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    Stupid Zacky...
    being all mean and abusive...
    please update soon! <3<3

    =]
    September 15th, 2011 at 12:29am