I'm four chapters behind, how did this happen??? I'm going to catch up and then come back to leave a proper comment...
Btw, Boston has this new player Axel Andersson who looks just like how I always imagined Jacob!!! It blew my mind, it was like seeing my version of Jacob come to life. hahaha
Barbie is so mature and I’m so happy she’s jeannie’s Friend, because she truly accepts her as she is despite what’s happening between her and Jacob. Thanks for the update and keep up the amazing work!!
Love the update! I like that Barbie kind of played ref. And I like that the convo between Gavin and Jeannie was almost carefree but yet it wasn't. It was like since Jacob knows, they are in the sinking boat together and are working together to figure out what to do. Anyways, love the chapter, love the quick update, and I love this story!!! Thank you! You Rock!
Thank you thank you thank you!!! I was never much of a Jacob fan but they way he responded in this chapter makes me give him kudos. I mean maybe he don't realize that she was just as much into the relationship with Gavin as Gavin was with her, but I like that he didn't throw a fit at her. I am very curious as to what will happen in the next chapter. So many scenarios are playing in my mind as to what might happen. LOVE this!!
OH My Gosh!!! I absolutely cannot, CANNOT wait until the next chapter. I guess the proverbial light bulb went off finally! I hope you update soon because the suspense will kill me!! Thank ya girlie for this update though!
The moment we’ve all been waiting for!! I can’t wait to see what’s next and honestly you should deff publish your work someday because you’re spectacular at what you write!! I admire your work and thank you for the update!
I love Gavin's slow character development. I feel like he's slowly starting to realize what his purpose in life is and I think him realizing this will help him get over Jeannie. Thank you so much for this chapter!!!
I have been away from Mibba for the better part of 6 years and I haven’t picked up a book for quite some time, but for some reason last night I decided to check it out again and skimmed through poems and stories for one to possibly read. Not really thinking I would find anything worth while until I found your story which kept me up until 3 am last night when I couldn’t possibly ready any more but at the same time wishing our human bodies didn’t need sleep! This morning I made a coffee and read about 6 more chapters putting me at chapter 33! I love the way you write, keeping it interesting and how you carefully unfold the relationship between Jeannie and Gavin has me wanting to read more and hoping the story won’t end! I have not been so sucked into a story for a long time so thank you for this wonderful read. I don’t know what I like more, the descriptions you use to portray the ever fleeting moments of first love or how innocent you’ve been able to keep it up to this point, and I applaud you as at first I thought this was going in a whole different drirection once reading it was a student, teacher relationship! Now back to my only day off this week, I must actually get to some adult chores around my home but I have a feeling I’ll be back reading your story by the late afternoon cheers !
I love this so much, you're so talented. Please update soon!!!! My leaving cert starts Wednesday and I need something to look forward to when it's over
My reaction to the ending was "oh fuuuuuuuuck". Omg. Ok you know what I think (emphasis on the think) that I'm ok w Jacob and Jeannie. But Idk still thank you for the chapter!!!!!!