Wildflowers - Comments

My reaction to the ending was "oh fuuuuuuuuck". Omg. Ok you know what I think (emphasis on the think) that I'm ok w Jacob and Jeannie. But Idk still thank you for the chapter!!!!!!

Dun Dun Duh!!! LOL. Loving the direction and the anticipation is building quite well! Can't wait once again for the next chapter!

Dun Dun Duh!!! LOL. Loving the direction and the anticipation is building quite well! Can't wait once again for the next chapter!

I feel like Jacob loves her in the way that she deserves and it makes my heart melt! He is amazing. I would love to see Jeanie really develop feelings for Jacob, even though I know it would take time to move on fully from Gavin. I have grown to understand and even feel for Gavin, but at the same time, I feel like Jeanie would be doing a disservice to herself if she ever went back there with him. I'd love to see her really develop her self-confidence, and see her true worth and that she is beyond good enough. I would be happy to see her end up with Jacob, but I also can't help but feel sad when I think about Gavin losing her forever. I am conflicted haha :/

I loved this chapter! I loved seeing Jeannie in class with Gavin and I loved the little confrontation between Christian and Jacob. It had a different pace to it, but I really liked it. I'm guessing it won't take long for Jacob to put things together now.

I was so upset with Jeannie for holding Jacob's hand only as a way to distract him from Christian. It felt like a low blow, because she'd never do that in a normal situation. It's always him who reaches out to her. And it felt awful that she only did it because she knew that would distract him. It might seem silly, but this small action made me realize that maybe Jeannie's not the right person for Jacob.
He's such a great guy, everything he said to her in this chapter just proves it (I loved that conversation, by the way. I've been wanting it for a while now and was so happy to finally read it). Anyway, Jacob's so nice and he really cares about her and he deserves someone who 100% wants to be with him. He deserves someone who likes him just as much as he likes them and who has no doubt about it. And I don't think Jeannie is that person. I think she likes Jacob, but he'll always come second to her. And he doesn't deserve that.

And I think it was so interesting when Jacob said "I feel like something gives me hope and then all of a sudden I’m about to lose you to someone else", because that's kind of how Jeannie felt when she was with Gavin. She was constantly scared of losing him.

I know I wrote a lot, but I have so many feelings about this story. I might be a little too invested.
Can't wait for the next one!

Idk how I feel about this chapter (or just the Jacob Jeannie conversation really)

I held my breath the whole entire time Christian and Jeannie were talking because I had a feeling it would happen but I am rooting for Jeannie to keep it together!! I also have a feeling Jacob will figure it out soon enough. Thank you for the update!!

Love the chapter! I wonder if later Jacob will figure it out...and what will happen next. I feel like Jacob is better as her friend than a boyfriend. Gavin, I'm back and forth with. But can't wait for the next one. And girl, you still have it! I love your writing style. It's so fluid and I'm honestly envious, lol

So I reread the entire story, and before I did that I was pulling for Gavin but once I reread the story I really hope she doesn't end up w him because what he did was really fucked up and he doesn't deserves another change because of what he did. And I don't want her to stay with Jacob either. This is the only story I have ever felt ok with the protagonist just staying single in the end. Thank you for the update!!!!!!!!

It's a good thing this was a lighter chapter. I love Barbie, she's such a good friend to Jeannie. And Jacob's such a sweetheart, it was the sweetest thing how he was thinking about touching her hand. So different from how things were with Gavin. I really hope Jeannie falls for Jacob.
And I really want to see where things are gonna go with Jacob thinking Christian's the guy.

Can't wait for the next one!

I love it! Jacob is slowly putting things together! I can't believe you don't have more comments already! Please update again when you can.

Still pulling for Gavin!

even though i feel like it’s going kind of slow, i like that; it feels realistic

That was an interesting chapter. I still don't like Christian, but it was nice to see him opening up. It answered a few questions I had about him and it was good to see that he didn't put more effort into helping Gavin not because he didn't care, but because he didn't know how to. Those two are all kinds of messed up when it comes to emotions, geez! hahaha

And I really like that he finally "got it" about Jeannie. I think him getting it, might be the thing that makes all the difference with how he approaches Gavin and maybe I'm getting my hopes up, but I think it might be thing that really helps Gavin to get better. I think Christian might be the key. I've said it before, but I think Christian's reaction to finding out about Jeannie was one of the things that set Gavin down hill in his relationship with Jeannie, so him finally getting might be the thing that helps Gavin get his shit together (Jeannie or no Jeannie).

Happy New Year!!
Can't wait for the next one!

I would still read this story in 2050. This chapter really brought out a new perspective on Christian for me, he’s a sweet kid

I think that this chapter was essential to the story, for Christian to know that Jeanie wasn't just a little teenager, that she truelly showed signs of a teen who is very mature for her age. I think Gavin should see a professional & talk with his brother. At this point I don't think that he is sad just because of what happened with Jeanie I think it was everything that accumulated. I also think hat the reason why he is so hung up on Jeanie still is because she was probably the first person that wasn't his brother that he was able to truelly connect with and it bursts him to know that, that connection is gone.

Thank you for the update, happy New Years!!!

It blows me away how much of a great writer you are! Seriously, the way you lead us through Gavin's mind is beautiful and amazing to read and it never fails to make me feel all these emotions.
It broke my heart when Gavin thought about the 'could have beens' and that little moment when he was a kid. And it's so sad that he can't recognize his own feelings for Jeannie or what loving a friend is like with Josie.
I really, really, really hope he gets his shit together and I'm not going lie, even though I love Jacob, I'd love to see Gavin and Jeannie having a healthy relationship together. I don't know if it's possible after everything they've been through and how Gavin treated her, but seeing his struggles with his feelings breaks my heart to point a where not only I too wish things had been different, but also makes me wish for them to end up together. Your story messes with my feelings!!

Anyway, hope everything turns out well for you with quitting your job and all. I don't know if you have any intention of pursuing writing as a career, but just know I'd definitely buy all your books!
Happy holidays and I can't wait for the next chapter (please don't make us wait too long, because I really want to know how Christian's going to ruin everything, since that's all he does).

Yay!! You updated!!!!!!! I'm so happy. I feel like even if Jeannie and Gavin never end up together I honestly don't think Gavin will stay with Josie nor will Jeannie stay with Jacob. But I do think that maybe Josie will stay with Christian idk lol. They seem more compatible than Gavin and Josie. Also I wonder who will Christian talk to -Jeannie? She's like the only person.

I'm worried about Gavin... And I just hate Christian. I can't stand the guy. But I'm glad he's canceling his trip. I feel like all this time he's been downplaying how bad Gavin is just so he can do the minimum acceptable while carrying on with his selfish life without having to feel guilty about it. So it's good that he's finally stepping up.
Also, I'm still heartbroken about Gus.

I'm so happy Jeannie got in! And Jacob being his sweet self. I love this boy.
I want to see how going away to college is going to change things for Jeannie, not just with Jacob, but everything.

Can't wait for the next one!

Okay, so I just found this story, like, two days ago, and have read every single chapter you've written... You're one hell of a writer, 'cause my emotions for this story are all over the place! Especially when Gus died, though, i seriously cried for an hour. I literally feel like you've met my ex and based Gavin off him lol. Barbie is seriously my favorite character! I love the bluntness! I'd love to see her and Marco give it a shot (wink wink lol)... Even though she's the main character, I'm not quite sure how I feel about Jeannie. I definitely cannot wait for another chapter and to see where this story goes!