Calling You - Comments

I'm so sorry I've taken so long to get round to commenting. I kept waiting for the opportune moment where I could sit down and give you the full attention this story deserves. I threw that concept out the window and am now doing this on my lunch break on my phone. So here goes.

I loved how optimistic Gerard was, even though he blames Frank (which is kind of true, but he realised that), how he held faith in the carving of initials into wood. 'F+G Forever' that is so damn sweet. Its also sweet that both of them have held onto the memories of the other for a whole decade, bless them. I didn't think you were going to skip such a large time gap, to be honest. I would have liked to have read about Gerard gertting sober and how Mikey helped through all of that. But then again, that wouldn't be Frerard anymore.

Frank is such a great character, such a wonderful humanitarian, working so hard to fulfil his dreams of helping people. Bless! Seriously, this chapter just made me feel all warm and fuzzy, even though there wasn't the happy ever after for the couple. I liked how Frank brushed that off though, like there's no time for a relationship, he realises what's he's missing. But will he go after it?

Gerard is very sure that there will be more for Frank and him... And that's what I'd like to think too. I have a splendid imagination, yes, but it will never do justice to your story. So I vote for continue on, give them their happy endings, they deserve it, don't they? Or else, torture them and then make them happy. That's always fun too.

As always, I adored your writing, I think you're amazing. More please and thank you.

omg that was the cutest chapter i have ever read!!!!! continue please :O

I own this page (:

I dont know what to say.
That was amazing and a little heart breaking.
You need to continue because I need to know what happens.
Please update...please?

Oh my god...
I have nothing to say for the last chapter...I'm stunned (in the best way)
Absolutely amazing chapter <3
Keep writing, I need more :D

i feel so bad for them all :/ cant wait for more!!!!

HE SHOULD'VE PUNCHED HIM!!!!! I wanna punch Gerard, dumbass.......make gee better pleaseeeeeee?????????? ):
UPDATE!

I think it was a good choice of yours to leave nothing resolved after the last chapter, that once again a few words from Frank is not enough to change things, I really do love that. Also that Gerard still feels uneasy to confide him. The relationship is still rather new, as it is, and the fact that Frank is living his life, going to college, he’s not always going to be there for Gerard. Why should he trust him?

“Unfortunately, when Gerard was on this cocktail he was either too belligerent to make a conversation with the younger man or he didn't know what a phone was and why it was talking to him.”

That line just cracked me up so much, yet it is a rather saddening idea, it was still hilarious.

And yet Gerard is still so dependent on those cocktails, and they’re making him so damn paranoid, and it hurts to see him abusing himself like this. The poor baby.

I loved the conversation between Mikey and Frank, how Mikey is so concerned but just jumped to conclusions. It was partly Frank’s fault… although, no, Frank isn’t to blame, its Gerard’s way of thinking that’s to blame. But I loved that Mikey was close to tears, it actually made my heart ache, especially when he said it was so much worse that before and how he was afraid he wasn’t going to be able to help. Absolutely beautiful.

Oh my Bob! How could Gerard steal from Linda? Oh, I knew it, I knew this was going to fuck with his job and his dreams. How could he let that happen? I’m actually really pissed off with him now, no joke.

I hope Frank talks a whole load of sense into him.

Once again, thank you for writing this awesome story, I love it, as always. And it’s cool, update when you can, I will always be here waiting and wondering.

WHY IS IT THAT IN SO MANY STORIES I WANT TO PUNCH GERARD IN THE BALLS?!?!?!?!?
And touch his balls :3

Dun dun duuuun! Gerards in trouble!

I wanna sap Gerard right now, all that work Franks mom put into her cafe and he stole!?!?! FIRE HIS ASS! :3 im so nice haha i hope Gee gets better he was doing so good ): UPDATE!! Pleaseeee :3

omg i loved this update, it was pure amazing! It reminded me of what happened with my brother recently, so I can sort of relate to Frankie. I love it and take all the time u need, that's what makes the updates even better <33333

That's really awesome news about your views and comments! You deserve it greatly for this amazing bit of fiction you've got going here. What other websites do you post on? I'm always looking for other stories and such.

Now, to the proper review...

I can't help but think that this Frank is the most perfect character in this fandom, ever. I adore the way he was cold to Gerard, he had ever right, and that he turned him away in confusion. He's rightly concerned about Gerard, but after that argument, and the way he was subsequently acting while off his head on fucking coke, Frank had done the right thing. And although it broke Gerard's ickle heart, and made him turn to even worse things (why would anyone want to walk that much?) it is how any normal person would react, and that is what makes you brilliant! I hate fics where one character automatically accepts the other when they have a problem that subsequently hurts both of them and just... hugs it all better, you know? I love how you write such perfect little characters, with true reactions, and they're completely whole, you know? They're believable and they exist in three dimensions, not purely for flimsy plot devices in a shoddy fic. Not that your brilliant story is anything like that! I'm rambling a bit, aren't I? Sorry, I hope you get the message through all of this right? Or shall I just clarify? I THINK YOU'RE AMAZING. And you may quote me on that, lol.

Now, Gerard... His character continues to fascinate me, his trains of thought and his consequent actions are brilliant and intriguing. I love the way he justifies his drugs, not that he is justifying his downfall, but how he talks himself into it. But I'm hoping that now that he realises that he's jeopardising his perfect job and his perfect little boyfriend the boy would gain some sense! Frank is a saint for covering for him, he deserves medals. Plus, that cute little fluff at the end awww, does that mean Gerard's going to actively sort out help from Frank now? Or will he begin to depend on Frank like he did on alcohol and pills and ruin every good thing he ever could have?

I want them to be happy again, it's so heartbreaking seeing them fight like this. Are there happier times on the horizon? Oh, I do hope so!

Sorry if this was all a bit... weird... It's hard to put all these thoughts together, you make your reader feel a lot while they're reading, kudos to you!

That ending part was so fucking sappy but so adorable!

That last line, AWH! perfection as always!

loved it,can't wait for more :) made me happy ater a tiring first day of school :)

oh poor babies :(

loved the update, can't wait for more :D

I'm going to have to comment on this first and get it out of my system...

GSugishfalkej... That was an incredibly hot little sex scene, my deary, you definitely have a talent for it, keeping the tone light, the humour dry, and the reactions just... sdgsjkks.... words can't describe what that did to me, ha! So maybe I should shut up now....

The first few paragraphs were great, I liked that little nod to how people relax in relationships, when the truth is Gerard's just fucking high, the silly boy! And then the inevitable 'it's just pills and booze, nothing bad' that's what they all say, will Gerard be making excuses for the cocaine he just purchased too? Bloody silly boy! And what makes it sickeningly worse is that it's because he'd hurt Frank he's going to numb (punish) himself. I don't want to see Gerard digressing into this needy, pathetic creature. I can't watch his downward spiral, he's too nice. And even when he's on the pills he's still thinking about what's best for Frankie baby, awww didums! But I loved the way his mind talked him around that, to being nonchalant, which hurt even more. I love the flow of Gerard's thoughts you've created, their coherent and real and just as confusing as somebody facing that situation would be having.

I was actually kind of worried that during that rather hot scene that Frank's mum was going to walk in... which would have been hilariously awkward, ha.

But then you had to end it on such a downer, you meanie! Will Frank realise what's up before it's too late? Will Mikey intervene without the fear of pushing his brother away? Will they part ways when Frank goes to college and never see each other again?! Too many questions, too much speculation, I need more, now!

*a wild hatchet appears* *picks it up*
Gerard, go say sorry to Frank and get away from the booze and pills.

Oh no! I just wrote this mammoth comment and it didn't send. I'll try and remember as much of it as possible, I'm sorry.

I love the insight into Gerard's mind, it truly is fantastic to see the workings and reasoning's he goes through in relation to the pills, how they numb him and how he seems to be immune to the consequences, how he seems to justify it all in him mind. And as readers we're yelling at him to see the truth of this but he's blinded by it. He doesn't deserve to go through that again, he should no better, silly boy. How could he do that to Frank as well? Surely he should realise that what he and Frank have is something truly beautiful and he shouldn't destroy it! I hope this Chris person feels truly ashamed for what they're doing, hesitating, yes, but not down right denying Gerard! Fool!

I can't help but feel sorry for Frank through all of this. He truly is adorable! Thinks like 'it's better with your hand' shows just how adorable he is. And everything about their relationship is shiny and new, its beautiful and interesting, how could Gerard jeopardise all of that just to feel numb? I kind of want Frank to find out so he can talk it all through with him, but I have a feeling Frank will get mad, he's a tough cookie that one and I can't see him finding sympathy for Gerard's plight. I kind of don't want him to because Gerard is being such a little bastard for even thinking about doing this to himself, his family and friends. Does he not think of the consequences? Does he want to lose his job and his prospects of moving out of his parents house? He is such a silly boy! I want to slap some sense into him!

I'm sorry about the wait, internet issues, but I really don't mind waiting for chapters of this brilliant story because I know the wait will be worth it every time. You are truly amazing! And I can't wait to be buying your books one day!