I REALLY LIKE THIS! The idea is very unique, and the way you wrote it is very unique too, starting at the very beginning if you get me. I deffo think you should continue with this babe<3 xxxx
I really like this bit it seems very interesting. I'm guessing that the nineteen year old boy is Frank and the the guy who comes into his mamma's cafe is Gerard. But that is just a guess. I can't wait for you too update! Xo Frankie.