I'm a little late on this, but this might have been one of the best stories I have ever read on here! You're an amazing writer, and I wish there was a sequel!
This has to be hands down one of the best written stories ever. It wasn't all about smut. It was about learning how to love and learning how to deal with everything that life throws at you. I'm happy I got to read this although it saddens me that there is no sequel.
I'm new here in Mibba so I couldn't read this story from the beggining. I wish I had known about it 'cause I've really enjoyed every word of it.
The way you've written it, along with the plot, is so addictive that I haven't been able to stop reading it until I've finished. I really, really love it.
I wouldn't mind reading its sequel but it isn't really necesary because I think it's perfect as it. Just amazing :)
*a month later* SQQQQUUUEEEE ish a cute ending girl :O Shut your face. You've probably already shut it but I'm just clarifying. I'm happy she came back and I'm damn happy Zak waited for her. I know we talked about what a sequel would be like and how much time it would take and I think I'm actually quit happy you're not going in that direction.
I love this story so much. Haylie and Zacky are adorable and perfect. Really bummed there won't be a sequel, I was hoping for their romance to continue on. Love it regardless!
I tried to wait as long as I could to read the epilogue. I refused to read it because I didn't want it to end. You have no idea how much it killed me to read the words "complete" at the top.
Anyway, I absolutely loved the ending. It was short and sweet. I'm literally crying right now. I don't know if it's because I'm sad it's over or because I'm happy she came back. Now I can just pretend she stayed there forever and they got married, had children and lived a happy life.
I doubt I'll ever get tired of telling you how much I loved this story. And I'm sure you're probably tired of me saying it all the time. =P Every single chapter was amazing and I couldn't have asked for a better ending. It was perfect. Please, don't tell yourself otherwise. =) Thank you for writing an amazing story. <3
By the way, I'm glad you didn't forget to write the bit about Mr. Baker like you did in the original. =P
omg this story is so darn cute. Im so in love with this story. i love the whole plot and how you started off on this story. Ive been always happy and excited when i get a notification saying that you updated and i love the whole ending part. at least I know that there together... really sad that it ended.
I thought that chapter thirty-three was the last chapter. So imagine my surprise when I got an email that a new chapter has be upload. I was happy that there was another chapter because chapter thirty-three was good but sad at the same time. The epilogue was the perfect ending to the story because now I know that they are together. It sucks that there won’t be a sequel but I liked the ending.
ahhh so sad to see this story go, but I loved the ending. I just needed to know that she'd come back... and I'd considered the possibility that zacky would've moved on, but somehow I knew he wouldn't. this story was so sweet and even though the ending is left a bit open to imagination (which I love), I knew from the start they would end up together and I think we can assume they will be.
can't wait to see what other stories you might come up with in the future. love the story 'lost' and your writing style in general... you're a great writer. keep it up <3
ahhh so sad to see this story go, but I loved the ending. I just needed to know that she'd come back... and I'd considered the possibility that zacky would've moved on, but somehow I knew he wouldn't. this story was so sweet and even though the ending is left a bit open to imagination (which I love), I knew from the start they would end up together and I think we can assume they will be.
can't wait to see what other stories you might come up with in the future. love the story 'lost' and your writing style in general... you're a great writer. keep it up <3
iewbdcwjendfosiejosdhciosdhc;sdbhvoisehfvoihfjefpo...................Perfect ending. I love love loove this story! Sad that there's no sequel, but still, you wrote the perfect ending, case closed. c:
Oh my goodness I missed updates! But they were all so perfect! I absolutely adored the ending. I was so happy that even though she went with her father, she found her way back to California and nothing seemed to change. I adored this story! It was just so amazing and I am so thrilled that there was a happy ending. Such an amazing story! :D