Until The End - Comments

This is so cute! Zacky is just adorable! Aah, I'm in love, haha!
Amy is so nice to Zack, as is Jimmy, Matt, Leana and Val! :')
This story got it all! Well, except Brian and Johnny, hahha! But I'm not complaining! Can't wait for your next chapter! :D

get your ass in gear and write more!
haha joking LOL
loved the update :D
I understand computer problems, mine's a right bitch sometimes >.>

That was brilliant, dear!
And I have to say, I fucking love what's going on between Zacky and Amy. It's not a relationship per se, but there's some subtle things that def make it seem like one is developing. Just the way he looks at her, and how he wants to protect her and all that... gahh, it's all so fucking cute! And like I've said before, I'd really like to see them together. From what I've seen so far, it doesn't seem like Matt would mind all that much! But idk, I guess I'll just have to wait and see. :D
On another note, I'm surprised as hell Zack didn't get in trouble for the whole thing with Brett. I'm still worried something bad is gonna happen, though. :/
But like I said, doll, that shit was fucking rad. Your writing is as brilliant and perfectly described as ever. And I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Yay! you updated.
But anyways if Matt was cool with Amy and Zacky going together, he might be alright with them dating in my opinion.
More soon pretty please. *pouts*

Sorry (as usual) for the late comment... but OMG. Those updates were fucking awesome!
For starters, I was pleasantly surprised by Matt's reaction to Zacky & Amy going to the dance together. Tbh, I kinda thought he'd be unhappy about it (not cuz of Zacky per se, but just cuz he wants to protect his little sister), but I guess that just goes to show how highly he thinks of Zack, and how much he trusts him.. And I have to say, it's fucking adorable. :)
And speaking of adorable, I loved how Zacky and Amy were so excited when the dance was finally coming up. If you ask me, they're totally into each other. :D
Which brings me to the dance! Lol, all I can really say about that is WOW. Like seriously, dude, I didn't see that coming for shit! One second things are all happy and cute... then bam! Brett comes into the picture and Zacky puts a beat-down on him. Haha, seriously though, I thought that was awesom. And I have to say, dear, you described all of that perfectly.
So, in short: job well done! And as always, I can't wait for your next update. :)

GO Zacky!! Well I didn't see that one coming.

Fuck my phone is annoying but I hope something happens between Zacky and Amy.
Great update. :D

I hope and Amy kiss or something. :D

Hm Matt took it much better that I thought little awkwardness but good .
Great update though :)

Stunning updates as usual, dear.
For starters, I thought it was cute as hell how nervous Zacky was when he was trying to ask Amy to the dance. He was awkward as fuck, of course, but if you ask me, that's part of why it's so adorable. Hahaha.
And duhh, he totally likes her! He can try to be all casual about it as much as he wants, but it seems to me like his feelings for her are pretty obvious. Same with Amy, for that matter.
But aww, dude, you should have seen my face when she finally asked him! I was like OMGOMG! CUTENESS OVERLOAD! :D:D:D Lol, seriously, it was fucking adorable. Also, I have to say, the nervous, yet excited tension between them was just sooo damn realistic. You wrote that bit really well.
Then again, everything you write is awesome. Which is why I totally can't wait for your next update! <3

Yay! Their going together I wonder how Matt will take it ?

WHY? Didn't he ask her ahhh Zacky grow a pair and ask her :)
Great update though

I'm sooooo happy for Zack!

Yay! The plan worked and Zacky is so dorky haha great job

this rox so far!

Well, there goes another plot twist I totally didn't see coming, haha.
Seriously, though, this whole thing with Amy really surprised me! But in a good way, of course. :)
LoI, I mean, as much as Matt might hate the idea of one of his friends scammin' on his little sis, I think it would be kinda awesome if Zack and Amy could get together. Not only would it be cute as fuck, but I think Zack having a little love in his life would do him well.
Anyway, the update was fucking awesome, dear. Not many writers can keep me as intrigued as this, but I've come to exect nothing less of you.
So yeah, keep up the good work & please update asap! I can't wait to see (read?) what happens next! Hahaha. :)

Awwww Zacky has a crush
Awesome update by the way :)

Awwww Zacky has a crush
Awesome update by the way :)

Fuckin' awesome updates, dear!
I have to say, though, I didn't really see the whole "rumor" thing coming. I kinda figured it would be like the original plan, with Matt and Jimmy catching Brett off guard one day and beating his ass. But I mean, I can see why that's sort of a sketchy idea, and why Zacky didnt want them to go through with it. I def. wouldn't want Matt and Jimmy getting locked up, and it's obvious Zacky doesn't either.
And ya know, spreading a rumor about Brett is actually a pretty good idea. Subtle, but sneaky as fuck and actually pretty inventive. I really hope it works!
Also, the whole thing with Zacky learning self-defensive is fucking awesome. I mean, he could have Matt and Jimmy beat people up for him for the rest of their high school career, but what would that really accomplish? He'd still be that same helpless kid, ya know? So yeah, I think it's a great idea that he's trying to learn to fight and take his own sort of action. Lol, man, I can't wait to see him doing some fucking ninja moves or some shit like that. :D
But yeah, like I said, the updates were fucking incredible, dear. Very interesting and well-written, with that realistic edge that I've come love about your writing.
And now I can't wait for more! :)<3

Good old Amy - if I was getting bullied, my sister would probably beat the shit out of them, and she's 15!