Forgetting Bee - Comments

I love this story so much... I'm so hAppy I came across it
I was looking for a great short read and I found something 10x better then what I was looking for
You truly are a great writer, I'm not flipping shit here but I can see this story play in my mind like a movie... Keep writing forever :) you have a great gift

~Elly

Best story I've read in a loooong time. the ending is perfect.! :) <3

I love the ending! And I prefer a original story, I would like to read another of your stories =)

I loved this story so much and I thought it was the perfect ending it wrapped things up in a fantastic manner and really confirms the characters' personalities.. As for the next story you write, I would suggest doing an origional because it always has more potential than a fan-fiction

Wow, this was an awesome story!
I think you described the characters' feelings well. Since I don't have any experience about losing my memory (and hopefully never have), naturally I don't know what it feels like, but the way you wrote it was really believable. :)
There was few grammar errors that caught my eye, but nothing that would've stopped me from reading.
All together, it was a very lovely story, I liked it very much. <3
Hope you keep on writing, because you've got talent for it. :D

I love this, but i can't believe that it ended already....i love this im so subscribing!

Amazing story! I don't want it to end! I did, of course, enjoy everything I've read, and once this story comes to a close I can't wait to read your next story.

This is amazing! It is so different from the usual, I just... I freakin' love it. The story is ultimatly sad and frustrating, but it has humour and love in it, giving it a balance. plus its more realistic then other stories on here, where the guy gets amnesia, yet his memories are back in the next week without any pain or emotional conflictions in the process. You do have a few gramatical eras here and there but then again this comment probably has a few itself. Cant wait for the rest!

Definitely a tear jerker. This was amazing as always.
As I was reading that, I got around to thinking "what if the situation was reversed" what would this story be like if Bee had amnesia and found out through one of Scott's secrets that she, herself, had had a misscarriage that she didn't even remember. It'd certainly be quite a different thing to experience.
Anyway, I love this story and can't wait to see what happens next!

Chapter 16 was really touching...... At least they can start again and be happy =) Update soon! =D

I love this story. I was in tears when i read the last chapter, but i love it.:)

Superb. :)

Your story is AWESOME! :D
I love it! :)
It's so sad at times too, but I love how their trying to make it work :)

Wow! That's amazing! I love where it's going :)

oo I like this Story, it would be cool Since he just found out she miscarried, that he remembers everything and that the box was the reason he left Mad and drunk and got into the accident.

:) I am still reading. And I still love it.

I can't imagine what it must feel like to go through that. It must be the worst.
I really hope they rekindle their love. Maybe not like it used to be, maybe it could be new, and better. They seem like they need it.

Can't wait for more Rach. P.S Did you see the Monster video?! It's epic right?!

Last chapter was a bit sad.... But finally I know what was on the box... Update soon ^.^

I completely can really relate with the notes at the end, but at the moment I am actually in a short creative writing camp and you wouldn't believe how much a little relaxation and peaceful scenery can help with the flow of inspiration. If you have any trees around your house I would recommend spending some time under one with a notebook or stargazing on a warm night.
Keep up the good work, I believe in you!

I want to know what she had in that box! I hope Scott remember something soon!

Still loving it