Forgetting Bee - Comments

  • akanevampire19

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    I love the story! I want moooreeeeeeeeee! =D
    July 14th, 2011 at 06:13pm
  • chameleon

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    *Gasp*
    The argument that caused him to leave was about that secret box, wasn't it?
    Oh, I am good at this detective stuff!!
    Actually, I'm usually not, and if I'm wrong than this is just awkward... Oh well, I can't wait to read more :D
    July 14th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • kbrice89

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    Love,love,the story layout! And the opening from Avril was amazing! Not only that but the story was awsome! And I LOVE IT! I'm so subscribing this! No doubt about it!
    XD
    July 12th, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • chameleon

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    To answer the question of whether or not he remembers, I say he shouldn't remember but should fall in love with her all over again ( I think you've begun to set that up already anyway)
    I really like this story!
    July 7th, 2011 at 03:13am
  • akanevampire19

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    If he doesn't remember her, it would be cool if she make him fall in love with her again, even if it's get complicated... If something like that happens to me, I think I would die..... But I really like the story! =D
    July 6th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • Catharine.

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    :'( I'm bawling. Sory I've been a silent reader--I have no idea what to say! Every time I read this I cry my eyeballs out! I hope he sees her crying and feeling like a dick. Since he is. lol
    July 4th, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • chameleon

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    Uhh... I have no idea why that comment posted three times... Sorry about that :-/
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • chameleon

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    Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that.
    I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • chameleon

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    Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that.
    I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:22am
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    Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that.
    I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
    July 4th, 2011 at 05:22am
  • fork it over;

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    So far I find this story really cute. Bee's dedication to Scott is adorable and the fact that she doesn't give up on him is great.
    I feel like her reaction to his amnesia mimicks how someone would actually act: complete disbelief, asking for proof, and shock.
    I also really love their first kiss scene. I feel like that's exactly the kind of thing I'd be thinking if the love of my life had amnesia.
    This is a really great story so far. :)
    June 29th, 2011 at 04:28am
  • fork it over;

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    I get a feeling that this is going to be a great story.
    I like the idea of it, for sure. Normally stories involving memory loss are from the patients point-of-view so I'm really interested in seeing how you execute it from Bee's point-of-view.
    June 28th, 2011 at 10:51pm