*Gasp* The argument that caused him to leave was about that secret box, wasn't it? Oh, I am good at this detective stuff!! Actually, I'm usually not, and if I'm wrong than this is just awkward... Oh well, I can't wait to read more :D
Love,love,the story layout! And the opening from Avril was amazing! Not only that but the story was awsome! And I LOVE IT! I'm so subscribing this! No doubt about it! XD
To answer the question of whether or not he remembers, I say he shouldn't remember but should fall in love with her all over again ( I think you've begun to set that up already anyway) I really like this story!
If he doesn't remember her, it would be cool if she make him fall in love with her again, even if it's get complicated... If something like that happens to me, I think I would die..... But I really like the story! =D
:'( I'm bawling. Sory I've been a silent reader--I have no idea what to say! Every time I read this I cry my eyeballs out! I hope he sees her crying and feeling like a dick. Since he is. lol
Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that. I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that. I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
Alright, so I've only read half of these chapters so far (I need to get to sleep) but I'll read the rest tomorrow and decided to leave a comment before that. I'm really enjoying this new story and never cease to be impressed by your work. Keep it up, you're truly awesome!
So far I find this story really cute. Bee's dedication to Scott is adorable and the fact that she doesn't give up on him is great. I feel like her reaction to his amnesia mimicks how someone would actually act: complete disbelief, asking for proof, and shock. I also really love their first kiss scene. I feel like that's exactly the kind of thing I'd be thinking if the love of my life had amnesia. This is a really great story so far. :)
I get a feeling that this is going to be a great story. I like the idea of it, for sure. Normally stories involving memory loss are from the patients point-of-view so I'm really interested in seeing how you execute it from Bee's point-of-view.