Aaaah Verna! That was probably the best smut I've read in a long time! Unf! But eh Gena! Y u come back! So so so so excited for the next one! I'm well and truly addicted! xox
Holy crap this was a great first chapter. I'm incredibly intrigued. I like how you've established some history, but threw in really important plot details too. I also found it incredibly cute how you described Zacky's glances lol. What was even better was having Brian describe Zacky ;) Wouldn't we all like to be there hahaha. I can't wait to see where you take this!
I totally in love with this. I have never read a story that grabbed my attention so fully than this. Beautifully written and wonderfully executed. I hope to read more darling.
HI VERNA. IT'S SARINA! I already said this, but I'm saying it again: I LOVE THIS. I can't wait for more! Michelle and Nicole's relationship is wonderful(: And your Zacky is fantastic! He's a flirt and I love it.