aah that was actually a really decent first chapter! I'm intrigued... I love the way you wrote this, its just really easy for me to read, without making me stupidly bored! Really liked it, so please update soon? (:
Oh sweet lord this is amazing, Honestly can not wait for the next update, I can tell this will become one of my favourite stories! love love love it! :D <333
I don't read het, and I promised myself that I would never ever ever read het but this really piqued my interest. I love it up to now! Can't wait for more!