Hold My Heart Captive - Comments

I WANT LYDIA TO BE WITH BRIAN BUT I ALSO WANT HER TO BE WITH ZACKY. I ALSO WANT HER TO BE WITH JIMMY. BUT THEN THERE'S MATT. MAYBE YOU SHOULD JUST MAKE HER A WHORE OR SOMETHING.

Loved the update! :)

ahaha omg xD I loved this chapter so much.. I can't stop laughing ahaha x) it's amazing!! Great job, as always <3

love the new update more please

ahhh I loved this last chapters! I didn't read them before because I couldn't but now I had a chance soo x) This story is being so interesting!! I'm very excited !! :D great job..

That chapter was adorable <3 Am I the only person who wants her to get with brian? Actually cant wait for wednesdays update :3

I'm seriously addicted to this story!
Aw I love Brian :) But I really hope she stays with Zacky xD
Can't wait 'til Wednesday's update.

I think she would be awesome with Brian because you can tell he really loves her. But you can tell Zacky loves her too. You could put an awesome twist in the story and have them share her... I don't know but please update!!!!!!

i realllly realllly hope she stays with Zacky. i'm just not a Brian fan. but i did love the update though. (:

Aw Brian is just so...I don't know. Just adorable. Loved the update! :)

I'm not sure if I want her to stay with Zacky or get with Brian :/

Can't wait for Wednesday's update :D such a great story

Yay!!!! This chapter was epic! Cant wait to read more :3

Amazing chapter, yet again! Can't wait to read more :)

the beginning made my night about Lydia wanting Jimmy to kill the spider xD anyway, amazing chapter (:

<33 Up-date again soon, can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

PLEASE UPDATE! LOVE IT!

Loved the new update :)

i totally thought Zacky would get pissed, but thank god he didn't. xD i cannot wait until Sunday, i'm anxious to read more. <3

I thought they would have all gotten the wrong ideal and thought that she cheated on Zacky. I was on the edge of my seat, like "nonononononononoonoononon!!!!1111one". I loved it, ♥