Hold My Heart Captive - Comments

omg ! I'm gonna cry!!! ='( at least brian is alive!! but I want them out of prison!! This is so sad x(

it's an awesome chapter anyway...

I agree ^^

Paired with Josh Ramsay singing Baby Please Come Home, and that whole Zacky and Lydia scene, it made me cry!

But I still love it <3 Sunday, Wednesday and Friday are my favorite days of the week now! :)

wow, all i'm going to say is i literally cried. </33

This story.

Is soo good!
Like I actually can picture them all sharing a house and fucking around in real life.

I cry because Jimmy would have always been apart of the crazyness.

<3

This story.

Is soo good!
Like I actually can picture them all sharing a house and fucking around in real life.

I cry because Jimmy would have always been apart of the crazyness.

<3

noooooooo whoever called the police this time is a dead fucker

WTTTTTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF?

Zomg u mentioned me in your authors note! squeee! i love how you're getting Lydias friends involved in the story :) i hate those police guys -___- the guys didnt hurt her and she was happy! those officers dont know anything about the situation!! gahh!!! anyways i loved this update! cant wait 2 see what happens next!

Loved the update! I would have tried to kick that police officer in the balls

OMG! AS IF YOU KILLED BRI BRI!!!??? NOOOO! I don't think he's actually dead...he's to sexy to die :')
Love this story :)

LOVE it and OMG I hope everythings ok!! Update SOON!!!!!!

Holy shit!! :O I wasn't expecting that to happen! I hope she manages to get back to the guys and I hope Brian isn't dead, omg :(
Such an awesome chapter! Really can't wait for the next one.

OH MY FUCKING GOD! you know what?! I'm crying!! Please tell me that Brian isn't death and they will all be finee!! ='( omg omg ! anyway, awesome chapter!!!

Oh noes! D: That chapter was really good, but really bad at the same time! Like, good in the way you wrote it, but bad in what happened in it.... Anywayssssss, I love your story still ^.^

Amazing chapter! :)
And I want to know why we'll kill you for the next chapter :O Can't wait for the update now XD!

Why are some of us gonna hate you for the next chapter? Had Brian beat up Johnny x'D haha
Cant wait to find out xD

I wanna know what happened in the kitchen with Bryan and Johnny....XD

half the time i wanna kill u for leaving me hangin so it will be nothing new ;) but amazing chapter as usual..tear wed seems so far away...

I would love to have another chapter up; like right away:) This story is fantastic!

LOVE and I so can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!