Swallow Your Pride - Comments

That was great! I appreciate all the research you did for this chapter! It shows dedication :)
"Watch your step." You didn't even have to explain that! As soon as Marc said it I laughed because I pictured the video in my head. I still laugh every time I watch that video!
I can also picture Marc sitting there in a backwards baseball cap!
But it was great I loved the assistant equipment managers pep talk!
Anyway I can't wait for more!
Amanda

Awesome job!! I can't wait for an update :)

Good job on the update! :)

the shoot-out contest with Jordan and Anna was adorable! i think Jordan did a good job of toeing the asshole/pussy line... haha! and i loved how Flower and Brent were her goalie coaches.

this chapter was so cute and funny :) keep updating

“Goalie to goalie.”....
....His constant smile grew wider and he gestured towards the barrier between the player’s bench and the ice. “Watch your step.”

I laughed so hard at this.. (:

OMG! i just finished reading and you mentioned me :D thanks but you didn't have to (: he probably thought we were stalking him cause the way home for me is by the airport and we had to pass it and that's where we were going. and my dad's 'flashy' car, i guess you could call it (a red convertible) was driving on the highway and he looks in the rear-view mirror and was like "Lauren, look behind us"
and there's Brent Johnson, driving behind us, then he drove next to us, looked into the car, and I shrieked haha (the roof was up thank goodness) and then he sped up and I think he thought we were following him, but we weren't. (:

but thank you(:
and I loved the chapter! Great details, like you said. One of my favorite types of stories are neighbor stories but this is by-far my favorite one!(:

I'm glad she got the last save :D
This chapter was adorable!

That was awesome!!! I love that you kept it realistic - of course Jordan is going to get more in than not. But at the same time I love that she got one real good one!!! Very good description of the whole thing and I loved how they came together after the save.

i loved how you wrote the shootout chapter!!
it had so much detail! it only made it that much better!
loved the update!

Those were two great updates! I am surprised the news about Anna and Jordan got out so quick but then again he is wanted by a lot of girls. And we all know how crazy some of those girls are!

I loved Anna's moment with Marc it was super adorable! The whole dinner banter with the team was hilarious. I could see that happening. And poor Sid and his assets! I am not complaining though!

I was worried though that her mom was awful or something since she doesn't call her that I am aware! But I am glad to see that I was wrong because her mom seems very nice!

Anyway I can't not wait for some Staal action all up in here! Marc getting married I didn't even know him and is girlfriend were engaged. Oh well great job I can't wait for more!

Amanda

best story i've read :D !

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i'm so excited for more :D

Is it weird that your author's note made me laugh like crazy. Loving the double update. Yay! Someone is pumped! I can't wait to read what is going to happen in her surprise appearance. Also her mother is funny, she's definitely got just a little bit of sass. I wonder where Anna gets it from? haha

Okay the whole lunch thing was pretty funny, poor Sid and his...uhm how do I say it politely, oh I know, nicely defined assets. haha

I really hope that they do go visit Anna's family for Thanksgiving. I'd like to read that.

I hope you keeping showing writer's block how awesome you are and update soon!

Cant wait to read the next chapter. It's going to be good!

Love it!!! Anna will be great! :)

Love it <3
Go team Anna ;) ehe!

I can't wait to see who wins!! AHHHH!!! Update SOON please!!!!

“Would I be a total ass if I kicked Anna’s, well…ass tonight?”

“Yep.”

oh Sid the man ;)
Here's to hoping we win that contest !!!
i really hope Jordan win's....
i know it's weird, but then he'd seem like the man, and anna can laugh it off... idk, i just... idk :(

two updates in one night!
feel so loved! hahaha

I loved the chapter!!! I was so excited for this sequel to come up!
Maxi Pad was hilarious.. Brent Johnson is beautiful in person, I met him after a practice. He had on all black and sunglasses and he was so nice. (: but I can't wait for the next one!!