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  • abearbear

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    First I loved that u updated twice because after the first update i was sorta left on a cliff hanger.
    Second i loved the J-lo glutes reference..made me lmao
    Third the put that in your juice box and suck it is like my favorite phrase in the entire world and i always get crap for saying it so im glad someone else says it too! lol
    The story is going so well so far..keep writing please!! :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • Aly!

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    ahh I can't wait to see how this game goes :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:42am
  • reneeanne

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    so excired! amazing, honey!
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:40am
  • millertime

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    Woot! Two updates in one night!!! Awesome! Loved the little talk between Anna and Marc. He is a sweetie. And yes Jordan, you will to figure out that fine line between ass and pussy!!

    Can't wait for more!

    (Sorry about the double comment last time around)
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:37am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    i agree that is way to much pressure! i don't blame her for breaking down crying!
    August 11th, 2011 at 05:15am
  • millertime

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    Poor Anna...I bet that would be a lot of pressure and second guessing yourself - being thrust into the public eye like that. But I am going to enjoy her getting lessons from Marc and Brent. Maybe Johnny will teach her how to take down a rabid fan with one punch? :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 04:59am
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    Poor Anna...I bet that would be a lot of pressure and second guessing yourself - being thrust into the public eye like that. But I am going to enjoy her getting lessons from Marc and Brent. Maybe Johnny will teach her how to take down a rabid fan with one punch? :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • JillNotJillian

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    Yes finally an update!!! Man I really feel bad for Anna. I could never go out on the ice and try and be goalie. Can't wait for the next chapter, I hope everything goes alright. Keep up the fabulous work!!!
    August 11th, 2011 at 04:52am
  • emmared FMT!

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    i know, i like the name-change game !
    but you know what i like better then that?
    THIS STORY!
    you just escaped yourself from a max-beat..
    it was close, but you got it out just in time <3
    you go girl !
    August 11th, 2011 at 04:49am
  • kristinvengeance

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    awwee! Loved it! can't wait to see how this showdown goes!! Should be an amazingly entertaining chapter!!
    Great job!!
    August 10th, 2011 at 05:12am
  • Lolif

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    LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS STORY!
    Update ASAP! :)
    August 9th, 2011 at 03:09pm
  • k-dubs

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    I think I speak for everyone when I say "WE NEED AN UPDATE ASAP!! PLEASE."
    August 7th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • chelseadaggerr

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    nice job!
    August 7th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • LDW Choice

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    alright, i read girl next door, and i've read this. but its only one chapter! that breaks my heart. i need more. more of jordan and his neighborly love. because its just so darn adorable that its hard to stay away from. i miss the updates. i miss a bunch of things that go with this story, but mostly the neighborly love. oh, and the puppy. i miss that too. sooo please, update again soon. i miss it so much and i need something to cheer me up since summer's ending soon and let me tell you, updates make me happy and cheery. just ask my best friend. i love to brag about all the amazing stories i read. its pretty fantastic.
    August 6th, 2011 at 04:52pm
  • k-dubs

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    That was so cute and hilarious all at the same time. I can't wait for your next update!!
    August 2nd, 2011 at 07:58am
  • xohunnyxo

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    lol what a fun way to kick the sequel off. When you mentioned the "Anything you can do i can do better" thing, I immedietly thought of that McDs commerical where they sing it xD
    August 2nd, 2011 at 05:25am
  • AlissaRose89

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    love it!! can't wait for more!!!
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:25pm
  • magznmo

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    yay, thank you, thank you, thank you :) i cant wait to see how this story turns out. and anna being a goalie lol i wonder if Flower will help her?
    August 1st, 2011 at 12:56am
  • I've got hope.

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    Great start to the story, girl! Can't wait for more! :)
    July 31st, 2011 at 07:28pm
  • weasleychick09

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    Great way to start the sequel! I can't even imagine what will happen in this one, but I know it will be great! I give Anna credit though she is a lot shorter than Jordan so she has to make up for lack of height! Although I am excited to read about her attempts at goalie! Maybe Flower can give her some pointers!
    Can't wait for some more!
    Amanda
    July 30th, 2011 at 02:24am