Please update soon! I've been checking my email to see it you've updated all the time and I've probably re-read this story at least 4 times! Don't keep us waiting!
@ bxgurl95 I've gotten a few comments/messages about the order of things and I'm sorry that some people find it confusing, but the best advice I can give you is that whatever the chapter title is (the numbers), that's how many days it's been since they've met. For instance, they officially become a couple 191 days into their relationship, which is chapter 23. The other days that skip around are just glimpses into moments of their relationship, usually in the future. If it's any consolation, with the exception of one, the remaining chapters will all be in order. Anyway, thank you so much for your comments!! Especially about the sex scenes, I usually feel so awkward writing them, and I'm glad they come off less weird than I usually think they will :) All of your comments lately have been great, and I'm so appreciative, thanks again!
Ok so I just caught up, it took me 2 days but I did it! There are no words to describe how amazingly fantastic this story is. I kept thinking that I knew what was going to happen to when and you still have me guessing especially with Kaylee and Jon. The character development is spot on and the detail even in the sex scenes (not just of the act but of descriptions of hot/warm/cold things being personified). You are a damn phenomenal writer. I am in awe.
I'm only halfway through right now (the halloween chapter), but I just wanted to say that Kaylee is annoying me a little ; I really REALLY get the responsible older good friend thing but she needs to lay off. Also I'm confused about the course of events: she went on the date, can whine made out with Patrick but when did she go for breakfast with kaylee and when did the ceiling fan incident happen??
I only started reading today and I was wondering why some are iut of order? If makes it hard to keep up when you don't reakize what dsy its supposed to be.
This was a fantastic update!!! I wonder who it is that is stirring up sh*t about her past and if Danny will come up at all... Thanks for updating quickly :) Keep them coming!! :) Now that I got this one, I want more ahahah