Good to See You Again - Comments

I really like the layout, it's lovely and simple :) The colours all work together and it's still pretty without being overly cluttered or anything.

I'm not a fan of second person but you use second person well, I think second person is best used in one-shots. If it's used in a whole story, it gets a little tedious. I like your attention to detail and your use of imagery is lovely, I can just imagine the girl narrating it and I can easily imagine the boy slinging an arm around the girl's shoulders. I like how you ended the story saying that she's never seen him before yet he appeared. It was sweet <3

Thanks for pointing out the errors. I'll be doing some editing soon. :)

First off, the layout is lovely.

I feel like I'm in a dream while reading this. I feel like I can hear your voice narrating in my head, the imagery is lovely. It seems to get a little rambly towards the middle, but you soon fixed that.

"I had one eye opened at looked at myself, practically in your arms."

I don't get it.

Overall, it's a really sweet one-shot. I liked it a lot.

I like this because the way you have written it is very dream-like, the descriptions create a good picture of the scene and it rather confused me to who the guy was so it was rather mysterious to me. Overall I thought it was written really well.

Although this one line doesn't make sense to me: "I had one eye opened at looked at myself,"

This has a sad feel too it but not so much that it makes me cry. I like it though. :) I kinda relate to it too. XD

This is really good, I like the introduction (: The details make it somewhat realistic and very amazing. I'll definitely be reading more of this.

Yay!!! I love this!!! <3 I wasn't going to comment because I'm not in the useful comment mood, but when I clicked off I felt bad leaving a story this wonderful without a comment!
So great job! This was amazing! <3