Eli Krauss & the Starry Eyed Girl - Comments

WHAT?! HOW COULD YOU DO TIHS TO ME?! HOW IS THIS POSSIBLE?! YOU ARE A CRUEL WOMAN.



I'm seriously so sad right now. Not only was that a short chapter it was also SO DEPRESSING. God you're such a good writer if you're making me this upset. CURSE YOUR TALENT. GAHHHHHHHHHh

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I'm so sad. How could you?!

^What she said. ;]

Jake is starting to be a serious problem in this.

And on top of that, it seems like Eli and Fiona are totally both not ready for this realationship, it's not about each other for them, it's about other people. Oh my god, if they don't end up together I'm going to be like this:



and this



and this



I will seroiusly be so distraught, because you KNOW they best be togeher in the end. And theres just a lot of sexual tension between them which is HOT.

IF THEY END UP TOGETHER THOUGH. I will be like this:

I'm glad they didn't do it. Sexual frustration, ohhh yeahh. ;]

i loooove thiiiisssss it is so sweet and delicate and lovely like a little flower :)

Someone once told me that true love never has a happy ending...and, you know, I kinda believe that. Especially after reading this. You make me happy and sad at the same; I love and hate you for that. God, your one of the writers I want to be. Your characters are living and breathing with personalities and so many things that I can't accomplish in mine. I haven't even updated a story to Mibba because I read authors like you and it makes me realize how much harder I have to work so get a taste of perfection!

It's heartbreakingly beautiful the way you describe things. Even though you keep it simple! Definitely jealous and definitely subscribing.

Oh hot damn, their relationship is mega-twisted lemme' tell ya. I have this strange feeling it won't last, which makes me sad in my heart.

IT IS SO DAMN LOVELY THOUGH.

The pace of all your stories makes them beautiful. I never have time to conjure up things that will probably not happen and if I do, you bomb me with unforseen plots. I love the name Fiona. They need to let it out.

Update please, pretty J? :]

OH MY GOD YES. YES YES YES YES OH MY FUCKING GOD YES.

I can't even, you're beatiful thank you so much.

during kiss:


after kiss:


overall reaction:


YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL FOR DOING THAT. SO MUCH SEXUAL TENSION NEEDED TO BE RELEASED. Lawlz.

But seriously, if Jake tries to get him back and comes in the way of their romance, I'mma slit his throat.

I KNEW CLICKING THE REFRESH BUTTON WOULD REWARD ME WITH AN UPDATE

I JUST LOVE THIS AND YOU SO MUCH!!!!!

YOU GOT A MACBOOK?! lucky. I got an iPad yesterday and I AM OBSESSED WITH IT. I am on it right now and it's so beautiful that I feel like crying. I understadn your motherly instincts towards your new device.

I feel like always get sidetracked and it takes me forever to write the actual comment.

ANYWHO.

THIS WAS ALSO LOVELY. I HATE YOU. WRITE SOMETHING UN-LOVELY SO THAT I CAN FEEL BETTER ABOUT MYSELF.

I love Eli's reaction towards Brad having a baby, and I Totally understand that jealousy. And I also liked the part where he banged Fiona in his dreams because I KNOW THEY'RE GONNA GET TOGETHER YO.

She is not a person, merely the reenactment of a person. Forehsadwoign? IS THIS GOING TO END BADLY? ARE THEY NOT GOING TO BE HAPPY?!

Don't do that to my poor heart.

<3

PLAID. Thats what you should wear. I think, last time I went it was flannels and jeans for me.. but idk maybe it's cause I have hick tendencies.

ALSO ONWARD TO THE ACTUAL COMMENT.

SO EFFING LOVELY. I seriously love this, I love the little side story about her and her boyfriend living together and the sexual tenssion that already SURROUNDS Fiona and Eli, they want to jump each others bones, I just know it.

:)

yay yay yay please update this every day!

This is so very lovely, I'm glad there was an update so quickly! I love the way everything is explained, and the slightly rushed aspect of it all that is present in real life situations. It's all very beautiful.

And so Eli decides he just won’t look at her when she’s happy. Oh my god I loved that line, you have no idea how much I loved that line and I have no clue why, it's just so lovely!!!!!!

ohmigod I love this. Your descriptions are lovely :) I'm so stoked for the big plans you have for dear Eli!

also, i'm almost tempted to use the default layout because the font is so small. but nothing personal, because i'm still in love with your story! i was just sayin...

holy crap, i hadn't even checked my notifications yet, since i already subbed to ur story, like, yesterday! I just clicked 'stories' and yours was the latest one updated.

like destiny. :3

I'm sorry about your sex talk, that must've been awkward.

ONWARD TO THE COMMENT.

This is totally lovely you know. I'm already in love with the idea and the concept. I don't know much about the characters yet but it should be interesting to find out, based on their appreances wich seem disarming.

The mirrors behind the bar are clean and reflect all of Eli’s work and Rachel’s ideas. this was a lovely line for some reason, it made me all happy and sad at the same time.

terrified laughter always happens to me on rollercoasters and shit like that. -_-

but i actually commented to say that you're still an amazing writer. usually when someone names their character Fiona, i tend to think of the ogre...but now i'm thinking of the princess before the ogre! :{D