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  • Foralwaysmydarling

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    I love that Ava and Jonathan got together! So cute! Geno, lock up your daughter because Johnny Staal has arrived!! haha I can't wait for the next update!
    August 9th, 2012 at 03:45am
  • JayCaffrey

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    I've always been pretty fond of your stories so this one is no different. Awesome job!
    August 3rd, 2012 at 12:13am
  • Lady Looch

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    “Ben is downstairs hitting the net and Ava is upstairs.” He trailed before taking a giant bite of his sandwich. “…with John.” He added, dodging out of the kitchen. Evgeni could practically see red
    bahahhahahahahahahaha

    The door opened a moment later and he immediately stuck his head inside past Ava, seeing Jonathan Staal sitting at his daughter’s desk with his laptop open.
    oh gosh. it's a staal. Geno should most definitely be worried!

    Evgeni prayed for another boy.
    lol his heart can't handle what the girls do to him :p

    Jonathan Staal was hopelessly and utterly in love with Ava Malkin, and there was nothing their parents could do about it.
    but think of how fucking good their kids would be at hockey, Geno.. I mean that's enough to let them be together in my mind.

    Geno thought he was going to have an aneurism seeing a message from Jonathan Staal that simply said: Sexy ;)
    hahahahahhahaa! i am just DYING at how funny that is.

    Boys would come and go, but she’d always be her Daddy’s little girl.
    ohmygosh so precious!!!! REmember when she hated him!!?!?!? Looooove it

    OHHH!!!! i love how their relationship has developed into this
    i love when things do a complete 180
    looooove that she's dating a staal too!!
    ohhh girl, i love love love seeing her older and seeing how her and Geno are together
    but i still wish rachel and geno had a baby of their own
    do that for me before it ends??
    you know i love this!
    July 28th, 2012 at 07:44pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    I loved the last two updates! And I love Ava as a teenager! Looking forward to more! <3
    July 28th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • samlo

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    Ahaha. lol. I totally turned my alarm off instead of hitting snooze yesterday morning, so I didn't get a chance to check my email before class. But I love that you kept with tradition. lol. ;) Hell, I didn't get a chance to check my email until this morning.

    Holy wowzers! I know you said a big time jump, but I wasn't expecting that big of a time jump. Ava as a teenager? I smell trouble, with a capital 'T'. And her and Jonathan? I wasnt' expecting that either, since she hated him. They're so cute though.

    Love the fact that they adopted two boys from Russia.

    You have me so excited for more, as always.
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:04pm
  • pineapple55

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    Malcolm Malkin...omg what a mouthful! love that Rachel and Geno adopted two Russian boys.
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I like that you wrote about Ava being a teenager, makes it really interesting. Definitely one of my favourite Geno stories :)
    July 27th, 2012 at 05:35am
  • Emily Lane

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    So I'm confused... is his name John or Jordan? Because it was John in the beginning, but halfway through you started calling him Jordan $:
    July 27th, 2012 at 03:03am
  • lola4aday

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    aw young love.. i'd love to see geno and rachel have their own baby. great update ;-)
    July 26th, 2012 at 09:19pm
  • Kare

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    I really like this chapter and I like that we get to see Ava as a teenage finally giving the poor boy a shot.
    July 26th, 2012 at 05:26pm
  • AshleyVC88

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    HUGE danger! But I always had a feeling that Ava would be the next Staal in the future. :) Ben and Malcolm seem precious and I can't wait to find out more about their personalities and such. (hint, hint ;) LOL) You're a great writer and this is one of my favorite Geno stories! :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 03:08pm
  • Mxprincess241

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    That was precious. I'm so happy you got but by the writing bug again :D
    July 26th, 2012 at 03:03pm
  • Rylie_

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    Loved it as always. I loved seeing Ava as a teenager, a love struck teenager none the less.

    Amazing job on it!
    July 26th, 2012 at 12:50pm
  • bublbabie

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    I loved that chapter. Good to see even though she is acting like such a teenage girl, that she still makes time for daddy.
    July 26th, 2012 at 10:43am
  • A1407719

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    an Update!! I was jumping for joy! well not literally...
    I'm happy things started to go better for geno and ava in this story! hoping for more soon!
    July 25th, 2012 at 08:37am
  • joeypotter

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    Yess!! You updated (:
    July 25th, 2012 at 05:27am
  • rehbein

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    I think I just melted into a pile of goo. Happy goo. Thank you!!!
    July 25th, 2012 at 03:21am
  • wildbillslady

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    sooooo cute!! I want more babies!! A little brother for Ava! Geno is soo cute in this
    July 25th, 2012 at 12:23am
  • lola4aday

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    awwe so happy for the update and yes still reading can't wait for the next chapter.
    July 24th, 2012 at 09:18pm
  • zillyboo

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    Finally! I'm so happy! Can't wait for more!
    July 24th, 2012 at 07:42pm