I'll Be There - Comments

That was such a sweet chapter!

Yay I was so happy when I saw this update!:)
Love Ava more and more. Seems like she's really coming around to Geno!
Also can't wait to read the Taylor story:)

This story really couldn't be any better. This chapter made my heart melt. I feel ya on the school work girl, stay strong ; )

Aww this chapter was so cute :) I really can't wait til your next update!

yaaay update! :)
this chapter was so cute!!

So freaking glad you updated!!
I was missing this!
So glad to see Ava and Geno getting along so well!
I love her and little Jonathan Staal..... Can they just please have their own sequel? lol One-shot? hahaha
I find is so sad when Ava asks about her Dad and they have to lie to her.....
I can not wait for the next update!

awesome chapter!

Aw, Ava can be so adorable when she wants to be!

Love this story. I was so afraid that when Rachel said, "Don't get separated" that that's exactly what would happen! Thankfully it didn't. I loved this chapter! Probably because it included my two favorite things: the Pens and Disney World. :]
I totally understand the two weeks in and it's like, you're neck deep in work. Love the updates when they come! And I'm excited for the Taylor Hall story!

So, I'm just gonna toddle on over to a corner and die from the cuteness overload of this chapter

Geno and Ava I love.

I loved this chapter and how he is really starting to feel like a father and how she seems to be starting to warm up to him. Hope nothing happens to change that. can't wait for the next update. hope it will be soon

This is so freaking cute!! Please update soon

ahhhhh!!!! you updated!!! :D
I feel like having them move in with Geno will get Ava on track to liking him full time instead of only when it's convenient for her.
OMG BREAKTHROUGH RIGHT AT THE END
yes this is going in a very nice direction haha
great update! update soon!(:

-kelsey

Always get so excited when I see an update for this!

Aw, poor Ava, she really has had a tough time. I hope moving in with Geno might see things getting better.

Great update! Looking forward to more!

so the end of that chapter caused me to have a flash forward, where ava gets married (perhaps to a staal boy?) and geno walks her down the aisle! :)

i love this story & no soul! can't wait for an update soon :D

Beyond thrilled that this is back! MORE MORE MORE!

Aww it's cute that she's finally kind of breaking her wall down with Geno. They make a precious little family!:)
Loved the update!

Both of the adults were shocked when the little girl looked up at Geno and reached for him. There was just something different about being held by a Daddy than a Mommy.
she just uses him for his snugs… how rude. ;)

Geno held his breath as the little girl took in the space that he had for worked months to put together.
I just love how much power she has over him. but this little beez better like what he put together for her. it's a princess room!

“Mama? Geno?” Evgeni froze when he heard it.
AWKWARD!!!! OH GOD!!!! AWKWARD!!! I'M DOING THE FACE!!!

He froze as Ava turned over in her sleep, snuggling up to him as she deserted Buzz. Relaxing, he slung an arm around her, letting her little chest meld into his as she snuck her thumb into her mouth.
why can't the little nug be this presh all the time!?!?!? why does she have to turn into the devil!!!?!?!?

“Please don’t leave us, too.” She mumbled
OH! MY! GOD! GENOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! AVAAAAAAAA! MY TEARS!! that poor little child shouldn't have to worry about that

he couldn’t help but grit his teeth thinking of her father and how he had abandoned she and Rachel.
i think geno should punch his fucking face in.

OH MY GOD!
you know, it's chapters like these that make me love the little devil…
why can't she just always be like this!?!?!?
HUH!?!??!
but seriously, I love love loved the cuteness of this and how she seems to be opening up to geno.
i'm sure that will change in the next chapter, but today she likes him :)
more soon!!!!