I was hoping it would have that effect on people. x] Though, hearing that Brendon was adorable is new to me. Took you long enough, but yeah. I really do like your work. I'm subscribed to Cemetery Boy and American Suithearts. I have to say that I am a big fan, though it's cool that you thought so much of me, that me complementing you made you want to do a happy dance.
Okay this is like THE BEST UPDATE IN DA WORLD!! Sexiest chapter, I was all "but why was it only a dream? Let it be real!" Oh and Brendon with tea and hangover was the most adorable thing in the entire world :D Oh and I only just saw from the chapter before..where you said that I had some great work, yeah well I'd like you to know that I felt the need to do a dance around my room for that :D
Yay! So, I am dying to know what's up with Brendon and all of his mysterious-ness. I'm also glad that you switched it up because usually Ryan is the brooding dark one. This is a nice change up :)
I'm glad to hear it WannaBeFree. It's so sweet of you to get so attached to my story. And yuukiluna, how is it awkward? I'm writing alone in my room. It ain't no thaaang.
Oh my godness. It feels like it's been forever since you updated but it hasn't even been that long. Maybe that means I'm too attached to this story. I don't even care that I'm too attached. Please please please! continue soon. Like tomorrow soon. ! Yeah ok? Thanks. I am in love with this.
For all of you that have had the same question as the one above:
Hello my friend. I am here, as per your request, to help you understand what I meant with how Brendon's and Ryan's powers are related. Basically, every mutant power originated from one mutant that had it first. In Ryan and Brendon's case, the power of telekinesis and telepathy used to be the same power. The first mutant that had it had both, because it was the ability to manipulate things with your mind. It's kind of like Adam and Eve after that, the first mutant had kids and their kids had kids and their kids had kids till they weren't even related anymore. So, basically certain kids thought that communication was more important than moving shit. So, instead of dividing up their abilities evenly, they put more emphasis on telepathy. Seeing as mutations are hereditary Ryan was born with more telepathy than telekinesis, and Brendon was born with more telekinesis than telepathy. Get it?
whoa...mind f*cked over here. I get the basic concept of the difference between Ryan and Brendon, but I...no I actually don't really get it XD I think that might be because it is like 2 am here. But I'd be delighted if you'd help me out!
Otherwise it is awesome. It's mysterious and hilarious "Brendon-sexual" yes. just. yes.
drunk scene was hilarious. and the title got me to assume some things. ahaa. the ending was so adorable too! My favorite chapter ever. well.. until they do the dirty
Thanks, I hope you've read a lot of Rydon so that you have a lotto compare it to. Thank you, the plot was, in truth, not that hard to come up with. I was listening to my iPod whilst working out one day and I began to dream up a fight scene between Brendon and a character you will meet later, and from there I just started making up a back story to it. Thank you, I love hearing that people think my work is good enough to be actually published. I hope to have an update by either tomorrow or today.
this is totally one of my top 3 favorite Rydens ever! The plot it just so original and everything. its amazing how you probably struggle with writing this sometimes, but you make it look so easy and just amazing. you have talent, honestly you do! it would be cool if this was an actual book, i'd be lovin that (: sad that you'll be gone, but when you do come back, i'll be very excited for you to update!
And last, but certainly not least, is one of the coolest comments I have ever received. vintageharlequins: Thank you, I pretty much have it all planed out on an outline, but I just need to put it onto a good copy. I'm so glad to hear that you like my story. I like your cat's name by the way, mine's called Nelson, because we got him on Nelson Mandela's birthday. I know what you mean about the crappy stories. It is so hard to find a half decent one that it makes me want to shoot myself. Hey man, plenty more ideas for stories out there. Your grammar wasn't bad, regardless of circumstance.