OMG i love this story it makes me so happy to read a story with more progress than problems (okay mutism is a problem but not too bad) please update as much as you can! it's so great to find a good story to restore your faith in mibba
The update was so, so cute! ♥ I am so, so sorry that I haven't been commenting. Of course, there is a valid reason - I have been in the transition of moving overseas, and in-between that I had a small vacation in Hong Kong. During this time, I have not been online at all. I totally loved coming back online to have a notification for this story in my inbox! I totally love how Gerard and Frank have been acting with each other! Frank is seeming a lot more confident ... not with talking or anything, obviously, but with his actions and willingness to do things. I really like the change Gerard brings to him. It is so funny when they finally come to be alone, yet Mikey always seems to find a way to interrupt. No wonder Gerard wanted to "go"! I'm interested to see what'll happen when there relationship is revealed ... it will be very compelling, I believe. Oh, and the start of this chapter, the candycane part, was too cute! Though I kept thinking that Gerard's staring meant he was thinking about blowjobs, hahaha. Update again whenever you can - I really can't wait! Thanks again, and sorry for my delayed comment! :hug: :arms:
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long, long time. I am totally in love with it. Frank is just totally adorable and Gerard is so sweet. I absolutely cannot wait for more.
AWWWW, that was cute, and damn hilarious at the same time, Mikey is just fucking, yeah. and I'm so excited for the hottub chapter, cause I mean, those boys shirtless, damn. I love you for dropping a comment, that's very sweet of you, and I'm always happy to comment. <666
haha hot tub?? this story is so weird (but in a very good way) it's innocent..yet not lol Frank just makes it seem that way because of him not talking I hope he 'finds his voice' soon!!! =)
OMG with every chapter I am getting more and more addicted to this story. I love it so much. really... Every little moment between Frank and Gerard makes the butterflies in my stomach go wild. They are so cute together!!!!
Oh, darling. This chapter was just so damn good! I am completely addicted to this absolutely adorable little Frerard couple that you have created. I love how even though Frank is needy and wanting those kisses [*swoon*] and Gerard is happily giving them to him, it's all so innocent.
There is such a gorgeous innocense about them, that I am just so completely addicted to! You make Frank seem adorably clueless about what he is doing, because he needs to be. He's just 18, and and seeing how he isn't... typical, it just fits. He has never been close to anyone before, and you are making him inexperienced and just gorgeous. I love him.
Please don't make them rush into things! I know they wanna suck face, and that's definitely fine. But; make sure you keep Frank with his sweet little halo around that pretty little head of his. Gerard's sweet little angel baby <3
They must be so sexually frustrated; Frank especially, since we just know that boy has never been touched. Bless his little heart. <3 And Gerard. I bet he just can't wait til that moment comes; but please, just make sure they are both ready for it. We just had their first kiss, after a BEAUTIFUL buildup, and I know great things are in store for how the rest of their gorgeous relationship will progress!
That moment with them on the bed. Oh, gosh. AHHHH it was just remarkably fulfilling, for lack of a better word. Cause truthfully, all I wanted was for them to be at this moment, where they are very afraid of crossing that very fine line of what is okay and what isn't, but they're at that moment that now that they have felt each other's lips upon one another, that's all that they want. SUCKING FACE, OMG! :yah
Love. Absolutely lovely.
And um, one more thing? PLANKTON.
I love you, Shelby. So so so much.
And oh, something else? Butt grabbing. And subtle kisses that no one sees. And gripping waists. And HALLWAY KISSES WHEN NOBODY IS AROUND. Need I say more? *swoon*
AND OH! WHAT A WAY TO LEAVE IT! "Hot tub, you say?"
Thank you, my dear, for that very amazing chapter! :arms: It was simply beautiful.
GAH, I want so much to harass you into writing more, but you just posted this. I suppose that will have wait til tomorrow :cute: This is me 'til then: :twitch: So yeah... get 'crackin... so I can then be like this: :brightside: Or :zomg: ;; you know what one I'm talking about. <3
Your story is wonderful, and this chapter was adorable. The way Frank was emotional, but finally got the guts to say something was realistic, and how you made Gerard react was one of the cutest things ever. Seriously your update lengths are awesome too, nice and long. <666 Good luck with college
Oh. My. God. This FanFic is perfect. It's so original and amazing and well written and everything I could ever want in a FanFic. Seriously, I... I love you. Please update. Please. H.H xxx