Don't Get Lost in Heaven. - Comments

Even though I'm not a fan of Oli, I loved it! This story is sooo good. :D Sorry it took me forever to read it, been busy with work. "/ Now I'm on to the next story!

DEAR JESUS GOD. wow. all i can say is fucking wow! this was great! i'm so glad i read it! :)))) oh my goodness. but oli. seriously. fuckin oli. god, i wanna hate him so bad but i just can't! ugh! anywho, i'm posting chapter 4 and then i'm off to kids with guns!! :D

okay, so i got to chapter 6 and now i must leave to prepare for work. I LOVE IT SO FAR. omgomgomg<333 oli is so fucking cute. i can't even get over it. this is seriously amazing!! <333

okay, i'm only on chapter 2 and i love it <3
"I fixed my bra and made my boobs stick out." YES hahahaha this is every girl when meeting a cuteass boy!!

i just have to say i've only read the summary so far and i already have feedback :) as i said; commenting religiously lol :3 but anywho, i love the layout! it's one of the main things i look for when i'm reading a story. like, quite honestly, if i don't like a layout, it's very hard for me to focus on the story. i actually often end up pasting it into a microsoft word document to make it neutral XP so good job! :D secondly, i ADORE the character pictures you've chosen! sierra is so pretty and, again, it makes it hard for me to focus on a story if i don't like the way the girl looks hahahah XP but once more, very beautiful lady! :3 and lastly, i am SO ecstatic that you seem to proofread your work because it killes me when someone has punctuation or grammatical mistakes or just, in general, doesn't seem to have looked over the paragraph lol so anyway, i just wanted to say i'm already in love with this story and i haven't even read chapter one. IN FACT, i'm so in love with this story that i'm going to shower now so i have more time to read it and don't have to waste time blowdrying my hair; i'ma let my lion's mane airdry while i'm reading this wondrously attractive piece of work!

okay, so celina out for the next 10 minutes to go shower :)
<3

I shall come in the night and kill Oli silently :)
But, besides that ass, this is one of the best stories I've read on this site.

So i just read the whole story in about 40 minutes and all I have to say is...HOLY FUCK. oh my god, im so excited to go read the sequel. *doing that now*

W0W. I finished it. Fuck me, it's suspenseful. ON TO THE SEQUEL:D

Well, she's prego. Can't wait to read on, & I subbed so I won't forget:)

"Hello insanity." I love that. Ha, snortin' on the count of three is bad ass lol.

Danny reminds me of me. But so does the chick ( I forgot her name lol).
“GOD DAMN MOTHER FUCKIN’ CHICKEN FUCKER! I WAS FUCKIN’ SPAWN KILLED AGAIN!” . “Goddammit I suck at fuckin’ Halo.” <--Quote of the year:D

PS- I love how he fiddled with the straightener, & I absolutely adore the plot:)

One: I love the way Oli's all cute with her (I'm not done reading this but I wanted to comment XD)
Two: I love the tat. I was gonna get that done, I probably still will- on my tummie:3

LOVE THE ENDING! (;

Go Sierra!! Ahh!! :D
Thank you so much this was an epic story
Now its time for the sequal

"are you ready to squeeze a basketball out of your pussy hole"lol that was funny
Dang your like a writing matchine 3 updates in one day your epic haha

Oli is sooo terrible to her! I hope she gets with Ben!!

update update update!

Arggg!!! Im getting madder(I know that's not a word but in this situation it is lol) at Oliver
He's such an ass but whatever haha
Thanx for the double update &letting me know

good chapter! :)

aaaaaaaaaaaaah why is Oliver acting like a dick?
Can't wait to see where it goes I love when you update! :)