July 26th, 2011 at 03:56pm
Don't Get Lost in Heaven. - Comments
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Oli's a little fucker. Poor sierra. I hope she does something..July 26th, 2011 at 02:26pm
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Oliver being a prick now isn't he? Good update!July 26th, 2011 at 08:41am
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I'm really enjoying what I'm reading. Just needs some spelling and grammatical corrections. A bit more description would give your story some flavour. Also I would consider publishing it when all is said and done. Good luck!July 25th, 2011 at 07:09am
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I'm glad Oli's being nice and letting Danny stay with them! :D
update soon!July 24th, 2011 at 11:38pm -
Awww you're so sweet Nikki. q.q<33July 24th, 2011 at 12:37am
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she has been writting I asure you that, our story is being strange and even when she does write it won't let us say so, if you read the authors notes her name will be in it or a cute little note from her and honestly if you read the detail in the story you can tell, I think she's only written three or so chapters but that doesn't that she isn't as dedicated as I am, because trust me she is, she's just busy alot. Which is fine, me on the other hand don't really have a life. BrittButt is the other authors username and I strongly recommend checking her out(:July 23rd, 2011 at 04:15pm
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This story is going really well, the story itself is a good read and you're awesome with updates.
It seems only one author updates now, I like co written stories to see the difference in their writing, sooooo, second author, come out and play!
Haha, keep it up :]July 23rd, 2011 at 03:26pm -
okay so I did exactly what you asked me to do :) I read all the dialogue and to me they sound more Scottish than English. What would be really helpful for me is when you're next online if you could send me a link of just the guys talking in like an interview or something (because, I'm not gunna lie, not really sure who they are) and I can show you a video of my friends and I talking, and we can compare and see if anything needs tweaking or not :) <3July 23rd, 2011 at 10:47am
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FUCK ME!July 23rd, 2011 at 09:09am
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Please update soon this story is getting better everytime I read itJuly 23rd, 2011 at 08:45am
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Please update soon this story is getting better everytime I read itJuly 23rd, 2011 at 08:45am
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I loveee this!July 22nd, 2011 at 08:01am
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Aww, i feel bad for her, but I also feel bad for Danny too.
I hope Oli changes soon!July 21st, 2011 at 05:13am -
Poor sierra :(July 20th, 2011 at 04:10pm
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;)
so, um, i'm gonna just go cry.
because i'm so sad that danny's gone.
and i can't wait for everything else.
finally she's pregoo. (;July 20th, 2011 at 08:50am -
:) BrilliantJuly 20th, 2011 at 07:55am
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I wonder if Ben &her will have a thing later on? That would be awsome haha
But anyways oh no!! :o she's prego lol
Update soon pleaseJuly 20th, 2011 at 07:09am -
NOO! Why would you end the last chapter like that?! I need to know what happens!
KAJFIOUFIJDF DAMN!
haha, this story is amazing. I was so excited for chapter 9 now i'm excited for chapter 10!July 19th, 2011 at 11:02pm -
Disregard the 8.July 19th, 2011 at 07:42pm
Now I really want her to stay with Ben!! Lol