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  • Max Ryde

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    heh, awesome xD
    September 11th, 2011 at 12:19pm
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    I loved this chapter! It was so funny. I love how Brendon teases Ryan and makes him go outside and then shouts, "We're just your friendly neighbourhood transvestites!" xD
    September 11th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • CannibalsDemise

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    Hey! I got a bone to pick with you! I read up to chapter two and Ryan is being mean to Gerard. :'( that's so mean! So what that he was fat! He isn't anymore! He's sexy! Its so cool that your mentioned him. ^-^
    September 11th, 2011 at 07:21am
  • GirlsNotGrey.

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    Is it pete/gabe/brent? >,<
    September 10th, 2011 at 01:01am
  • maxx danziger

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    Hello! I'm loving this story so much! It's really good :D Update soon please :)
    September 9th, 2011 at 05:57pm
  • Max Ryde

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    :D 'tis a bit long
    September 9th, 2011 at 12:51pm
  • White Eskimos

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    The sleaziest character is always Pete or gabe. WHAT DOES THIS MEAN
    September 9th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • Max Ryde

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    :D
    September 5th, 2011 at 08:16am
  • PsychoBarbie

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    holy jgdasgipsdighsgshsofhso, I cannot even express how much I love this story :)
    September 4th, 2011 at 12:57pm
  • trixcereal

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    update SOOOON,
    i fucking love this!
    and the smut.. yeah the smut..
    it was just delicious
    September 2nd, 2011 at 07:29am
  • Nameandnumbers

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    Awesome update!!
    Yay smut xD
    Tehee
    September 1st, 2011 at 04:31am
  • PsychoBarbie

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    this story is simply awesome !
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • PsychoBarbie

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    this story is simply awesome !
    August 25th, 2011 at 06:57pm
  • Max Ryde

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    ^Agreed.
    Your awesome dude
    August 25th, 2011 at 01:24pm
  • SexyDork17

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    I should know better than
    to poke a dying beast with a
    stick by now...though every
    time it happens I don’t think “I
    should stop poking that guy”...
    All I think is “Next time...I’m
    going to get a longer stick”
    Best effing quote EVER!!! I seriously
    love it with a passion!!! I'm gonna use
    it now at random places and people
    are gonna be like 'Wow... you're
    awesome! o,o' hahaha So this was
    a sad chapter cuz Ryan's daddy
    got all violent D; But hopefully it'll be
    happier soon. On a scale of smutness
    I give you a 5... It was good and not
    so descriptive, which could be really
    good, but you didnt put enough details.
    It seemed like it ended all way to fast
    and for a second I hadnt even realized
    they were doing something "naughty"
    :P But you really tried and some people
    might've really liked it! Dont take my
    critique too seriously because I'm just
    the kind of person who likes smut :P
    Anyways, more soon because I seriously
    just LOVE this story... It's pretty amazing
    and well written ^-^ XD

    xo
    Anita:)
    August 25th, 2011 at 11:04am
  • FueledbyHorribleKid8

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    OMG I love it so far!!!!!!! Yes I am very confused, but OMG what Brendon is GAAAHHHH. And just Ryan and how he has that spot for Bden. I LOVE it. . :3.
    August 20th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • FueledbyHorribleKid8

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    OMG I have read The Graveyard Book! (only read the first chapter btw) Anyway I love Ryan's attitude.
    August 19th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • Max Ryde

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    :D :D :D
    Awesome!
    August 13th, 2011 at 11:27am
  • Helvius Cinna

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    that was deep! the living or dying thing. dang-a...and btw why was the lady in the front yard so jumpy last chapter? Was it because she actually saw Brendon or because she saw Ryan whistling/happy and shit? :)
    August 12th, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • maxx danziger

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    I actually did not see that coming. It's kind of obvious though when you think about it, that Brendon is 'death'. This is pretty good, amazing actually. I like how this story is going :) Can't wait to read more.
    August 11th, 2011 at 08:18pm
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