September 30th, 2011 at 02:15am
Cemetery boy - Comments
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oh my god that last chapter ldsihfgldsbgbdsfbiu this story is AMAZING <3 the whole Vices and Virtues referencing makes this, like PERFECT.September 30th, 2011 at 01:29am
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The last line Ryan said really reminded me of Peter Pan o.o
Anywhore, a great chapter again and thanks for letting us know what Brendon's name means. Of course it sounds so beautiful like a perfect name for desire, Luxuria. :D
And I don't mind about the bashing of Gerard's package. That seems weird...saying that.
Okay dokay. Loved it and really want to read more to find out more about Brendon. And the Angels!
PS: Thanks for being lovely and commenting on my story chapter. You're a star xD
Update!September 29th, 2011 at 08:53pm -
Okay, what is it? Why is Brendon a traitor. I'm as anxious to know as Ryan. This is really good once again, keeping me wanting you to update like really really soon! :D :DSeptember 28th, 2011 at 07:34pm
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OMGOMGOMG I wanna know what Brenny is hiding >.<September 27th, 2011 at 01:21am
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you're blowing me,
non sexually though.
i keep wanting more and more of this,
i actually kinda like your cliff-hangers,
and thats weird cuz usually, i wanna like stab the author if they leave
it at something like this.
but it fits this story, a reason i love it so much!September 26th, 2011 at 05:34am -
I've never understood why no one ever likes Pete in Rydons... Maybe I'm just missing something. Oh well. Anyhow, I really love this story. Gerard in so much leather, Brendon being mysterious, Ryan drunk on whatever those drinks are... I love it all. Update soon!September 26th, 2011 at 03:16am
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im so confused right now -_- I understand that some serious
shit just went down, but I have no clue why it all happened
and... Oh and one critique, Gerard was mentioned AAAAAGES
ago as "the fat kid" who sat in front of Ryan at school, as
you can see I was so hurt that I can't forget that insignificant
fact : / I need more because this chapter just comeplete
stirred me along as a lost soul now! OH! And haha Pete, very
nice showing up to a circus themed part not themed AT ALL!
hahaha :) More soon!
xo
Anita:)September 26th, 2011 at 02:11am -
What's wrong with the plot?
Awesome update as per-usualSeptember 24th, 2011 at 11:13am -
This is so...AWESOMESAUCE! Haha I love saying that :) So Brendon is a traitor? Lol with Gerard and the comment Ryan made about his leather pants xD and what's the deal with all of them?
Yeah so I loved this and I really really want an update soon!September 23rd, 2011 at 11:33pm -
OMG "You are not welcome here" D: holy crap! I am so excited for the next chapter it's not even funny. :))))September 21st, 2011 at 03:15am
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MIND FUCKED! ahaha :) I like it, especially the creepy
'Your not welcome!' from the woman :) ehehee! I want
more soon please:D Thank you dear author (brain fart
almost put reader ahaha! BTW I'd like, love you if you
checked out some of my stories... Sorry for the small
pimp but really I want feedback :/) So you get me so
attached and glued to the story, as if I was hanging from
the edge of a cliff and a mattress was suddenly put below
me to catch my fall so I let go then BOOM end chapter
and the fucking mattress disappears! (Have you ever
watched Between the Lions? It's a kid's show and I used
to love it {okay I still do-_-} but anyways... There's a
cliff hanger thing in there and he always is so close to
being saved but right when he lets go the 'savior thing'
suddenly is gone and he needs to reach for the edge again
for dear life... My reference reminded me of that ahaha!:D)
Okay sorry I'm babbling, but it's your fault!!! Okay, so
please update soon, I'd really appreciate it :D Love ya!
xo
Anita:)September 20th, 2011 at 12:57am -
mind fuckkkkkeeeed,
once againSeptember 19th, 2011 at 11:46pm -
this is getting really intense!!! i can't stand it, i need to read more :DSeptember 19th, 2011 at 09:45pm
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Not mind fucked yet.
Well, the Grey Lady is a tad rude...September 19th, 2011 at 10:57am -
This is weird coming from me buy: what the hell is Brendon hiding? This is sooo good! You're sucessfully screwing up my mind :D Tis very awesome though :3!
Oh thanks for commenting on my story, it means a lot :)
Hope to see an update soon! :DSeptember 19th, 2011 at 09:11am -
This is great, even though it's a little short. You always make these chapters so cute and funny xD It's brilliant. I like how you referred to shadowlands as the panic. That's cool. And Inception. God I didn't get any of that movie.
Looking forward to your next update :DSeptember 18th, 2011 at 06:10pm -
Dorothy xD
Coolio~September 18th, 2011 at 12:37pm -
"We're just your friendly neighborhood transvestites" OMG xDSeptember 12th, 2011 at 06:49am
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in the name of rydon ? oh well then I really should, heh ...
anyway, indeed brendon teasing ryan ... I don't know , it's just fun to read
godo work as usualSeptember 11th, 2011 at 04:19pm
Angels.
Angels.......
*shifty eyes*
hmm