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  • appley92

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    Awh he's so cute :DDD
    March 1st, 2012 at 04:52am
  • Star Angel

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    update soon please love this so much
    February 29th, 2012 at 10:36pm
  • michelle822

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    Loved this chapter!
    February 29th, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • deariloveyou

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    woah i got confused there in Blake's dreams XD
    Such a pretty and awesome story! thanks for writing it, can't wait to read more! ;3
    I love this story! update soon :)
    February 24th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • appley92

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    ooooh i do love it :))

    at first i was like holy shit! what is happening? but it is really good :D
    February 17th, 2012 at 04:29pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    am I reading hints to a possible future?

    lol LOVED LOVED LOVED the update
    February 16th, 2012 at 06:12am
  • rachael rampage

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    Is the hidden song title in chapter 21 "stay in shadow" by finger eleven?
    January 29th, 2012 at 09:18pm
  • Star Angel

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    more more more please
    January 18th, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    Dad ..... not what I was expecting but GREAT =D
    January 18th, 2012 at 07:39pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    I rather enjoy she's rough and tough but still a softy you done good with her.

    and GO BLAKE GO....kick that fuckers ass WOOOHOOOO
    January 12th, 2012 at 08:25pm
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Love itttttt <3
    January 12th, 2012 at 06:24am
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    AWE baby you didn't have to do that...... :D THANK YOU THOUGH Devon is so kickass you write her so well and I love Blake really I am a sucker for the bad boy type
    December 29th, 2011 at 08:21pm
  • lovemecrazy

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    I am in love with this story!
    December 21st, 2011 at 07:21am
  • Spongeboblover15

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    This story is amazing
    December 21st, 2011 at 01:03am
  • LumosMaximus

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    Hahaha, loverboy... xD Never woulda thought of that! Really, really good update. I wonder where they're going though, and who's trying to kill Allison. Maybe one of his psycho ex-girlfriends? Or could it just have been someone Allison's step-loser sent?? Hmmm.....I wonder. But try to update again soon!!! I wanna know what happens!
    December 17th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    you can't see me but I am sure you can picture me frantically throwing my arms around clapping with a :0 face....ahyeah LOL

    HOLY SHIT BATMAN THAT WAS KICKASS....can Devon hit Rivers again that made me happy? *shifty glance*
    December 16th, 2011 at 08:14pm
  • LumosMaximus

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    Gah, so many chapters I had to catch up on!!! But it was worth it. :D I didn't have internet for awhile, so I didn't get a chance to read this at all. BUT, amazing! And what's going to happen?? O.o I wanna knoowww!!!!!
    November 29th, 2011 at 03:00am
  • dawn8279

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    sorry to hear about your computer but the update is great
    November 28th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • Merida

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    This story is really alluring. Though I can't tell if there is a picture in the layout, it won't load for me if there is. Anyway, Alison's life seems such a wreck! She seems like she's in so deep stuff with a mob guy. Not to mention she's becoming closer to Blake.

    I'm not a total fan of the layout. It seems a bit too dark for my liking.

    This entire story is such a mystery! But, Alison is such an emotional wreck. Poor girl. I'm sorry this comment took so long. I thought I had commented! Thank you for entering my contest.

    I liked the way you started this story out, though it does seem like the regular 'damsel in distress' type.
    October 27th, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Emotional Wind

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    Youre doing great so far, but instead of using (Brackets) I would simple put, two comers, and continue. otherwise it's great
    October 21st, 2011 at 05:16pm