Black Lace - Comments

Aww. Blake to the "rescue!" I like these little moments of inbetween when it shows the budding relationship, and not just the climatic moments. It helps me get into their minds. :0)

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That was very different than the other chapters, different from all the flirting/sex/whatever else you put in.This was a very intense chapter and it was very very very good. Well done.

Oh god.. they're fighting. I just want them to get together and have a happy ending. They both deserve a happy ending. But anyway. I loved the update. And I'm glad you liked my last comment.

I wonder what exactly his motives are for wanting to go with her next time she goes to visit her mom and little sister. And when he does, will we find out what exactly happens if her douche bag step-dad comes home earlier than expected?? Gah, so many questions..Going to check the journal out now. :D

pure awsome

This was great! I loved the little expert thing. I can't wait until the story progresses that far! And I also really like how even though you don't get a lot of comments you don't beg for them. A lot of stories do that and I think it is one of the most annoying this a writer can do. Again, I love your story and just everything about it.

so good i love this so much cant wait for more i loved the little prize lol

I love this! Gimme more :D

love this please update soon

wow this is great! Can't wait until the next update! :)

Gah! I bet her step-dad beat her up!! D: Which would be horrible, update please!!!!!! I wanna know what happens!!!!!

Love Ali!! Loved how she rejected him (priceless)!!! But she needs to stop frontin' cause she knows she wants him; I know I would ; ) Can't wait for the next uupdate!!!!!

Wow really good story....there's seems to be more to Blake Rivers than meets the eye so far. Anyways hope you update soon because I for one can't wait to read more :)

Wow, I wonder if Blake's going to give up or bug her until she agrees to coffee with him..hmm. All in all, a very awesome update!!! Can't wait for the next one! :D

update soon please

love this please update soon

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Please update soon. <3

Her step-dad sounds like a real douche bag. >.< But other than that, I loved it. Can't wait for the next update!!! :D

Moreeeeeeeeee ;)