All At Once - Comments

I love how you wrote this this in past tense! It's so different.
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<3

this is so good!
so different.
so new.
so refreshing. you work well with second person.

i love the style of this story. i hope you start writing it again some day soon. :)

I seriously am loving this story. There's barley any JGL on here and I'm happy to find one written so well:)

I love JGL but mibba is a wasteland for fic about any part of him. I happy to see someone does write, and do it well. So thank you I think this is wonderful and a bit different than most. <3 frankie

I like it :)