Really liked the update and can't wait for the next one. Oh and just so you know the twin you've used in your banner is James(Fred) and you can tell because he has a scar on his right eyebrow. Just thought I should let you know. Even though I doubt anyone else will realize it.
Story's good so far, I really like it. And Mayday Parade is amazing!! My favorite songs by them would have to be Three Cheers for Five Years and Jersey.