Wow, your words are so... like, your description...everything! It's great. I love this. I mean, usually this is not the kind of story I would read, but usually the writing isn't very good I guess.
You are amazing at writing and I am so into this story. Gosh! You're very good at writing, I have to say. :3
I can tell you're very proud of this piece. If not, you should be. It's very intriguing and your writing style is amazing. You have this type of edge with your work that's both hypnotizing and intoxicating. I love it. Very much.
You are amazing at writing and I am so into this story. Gosh! You're very good at writing, I have to say. :3