Break Your Little Heart - Comments

This was so good!
I'm excited. John def needs a lesson but I feel like its gonna back fire

Ooooh I'm sensing some best friend drama coming up!

Well, I got really disappointed with Johno. I mean he was starting to be a real sweetheart, with all that being nice to Natalie and being worried about Spencer at that venue and ending up not ditching that day. I was really starting to warm up to his character here. He just had to go screw Carmen and ruined it. ugh. I mean, I can imagine Spencer's reaction when she finds out - and I really think Spencer was starting to like John here because she was supposed to go tell Natalie she wasn't going to be coming to work that day but then John answered and she changed her mind completely, so I'm taking that as a sign but then when she finds out about the whole Carmen thing, I'm pretty sure that her slight liking for John will vanish and she'll go back to despising him. :|

But anyway, this was still a great update! :) I hope you update soon Ketely.
I am definitely hooked. It's like Of Confidence all over again.
You and your bestfriend are such good writers. :)

Lalalala. That chapter was just.. Ugh. Carmen. AHHAHAHA
Anyway, I hate how Kenny is in denial NU. Just no. And what will happen with Halvo and Spencer? This is so exciting. I swear, UPDATE

i love this story so much! can't wait for the next update :)
that johno is a complicated character!

At the beginning of this chapter I was starting to like John more because he was being a sweetheart but the ending kind of ruined it for me. I think deep down he's a good person though because he's so sweet to Natalie and was talking about how he wanted a girl he could actually care about.

Also, I think if John likes Spencer, Kennedy should apologize or she should find a sweetheart and johno should get jelly and yesh :)

elohel. i love natalie. such a cutay. why am i writing weird? dk.. asld';djskfhj loved the update, but update moar because lyke i love your updates and awhl :DD

John really is confusing. Maybe he's only nice to Spencer. I think that at least. He's only nice to her and then eventually he's gonna try to get in her pants but she definitely won't take his crap, especially after what he did to Carmen. I don't even know what's gonna happen with Kennedy. Hopefully he'll apologize then Spencer won't accept it or something so he can be out of the picture.

Ken was a major douche
John wants somethiing more & spencer does too!
They need to get it on..well not on but you know what I mean:)
Keep it up. This was a great chapter!

I'm excited to see what happens next, how this all unfolds now. I really liked this chapter

Gross John's a manwhore.
I hope he starts to like Spencer though!

I wish the updates were faster I think I really like this story

More please!

omg. Ketely and Bree. I swear, you have to update soon. Or I will freking flip ><
And yes, john is a bad boy which turns me on.
Halvo is so asdhghasd. which turns me on.
Kennedy is so sweet which also turns me on.
And Spencer is pretty. Just a bit.. well. Im jealous. XD

I just read this today and Ketely, YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON, ok?
Because this is a really interesting story and you got me hooked with just those five chapters. You have to update it, I really need to know what happens next.
At first I was on Kennedy's side because he sounded like a real sweetheart but then wtf?! If he doesn't want to be with Spencer then why the hell does he do that to her? D: Now I'm on John's side but that is just for now.. please update soon, Ketely. I beeeeeeeeg you. haha. :) <3

I just found this today, but I LOVE IT! Your amazing and I love john's character<3

Gosh I need another chapter you guys! :p update more often :p

kennedy is a dick. finally you sluts got it right.

UGH WHY IS KENNY AFRAID OF LABELS!!!!!! :( But I love it. I can't wait for more.