Break Your Little Heart - Comments

  • lovelyhope

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    I kind of hated John at the beginning of this chapter but then my hatred switched to Kennedy. What a douche. John's right... Spencer can do a lot better.
    Eric made me laugh. Spencer should forget about both John and Kennedy and run away with Eric hahaha
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • bottle bohemia

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    wow kennedy is an ass. i kinda didn't see that one coming
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    saijfkfewopkfmwoq9skm!!!!!!!!!! Kennedy is being a jerk! Sure, okay she knew he didn't want to have a real relationship, but it's not fair of him to keep on stringing her along! And I still don't know about John. Confusing boy, he is. At least he's being nice to her now! Or not. Maybe it's just because she's gonna cover for him, which is totes mcgotes bogus. Anywho, back to Kennedy. KENNEDY IS SUCH A JERKFACE!!!!!!!! Haha, but yeah, I just hope Spencer stops wasting her time with him because he wasn't even going to chase after her. If he really cared, he wouldn't have left her.
    July 27th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    ME LIKES A LOT. I think John is definitely going to try something with Spencer. I can feel it already. He's gonna hate her and first and she already hates him and then I don't know I guess the next time he brings the kids food or whatever he's gonna do next, he's gonna see how great of a person Spencer is and then he's gonna wanna be with her and then he's going to start looking forward to helping out at the orphanage and and and uhhhhhhhhh HE'S GOING TO START TO TRY TO SEE SPENCER AND THEN HE'S GOING TO EVENTUALLY ASK HER OUT AM I RIGHT OR AM I RIGHT
    July 27th, 2011 at 01:27am
  • becauseiamfree

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    this story is beautiful :3
    cant wait for more!
    <3
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • lovelyhope

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    John's kind of a douche for not realizing that he and Carmen went to school together.
    I'm wondering what the money's for and why Spencer has to pay it.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 12:23am
  • bottle bohemia

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    this was a good update. i'm curious as to who exactly natalie is. and why she wanted to see her right away. and the money.
    yeah basically i can't wait to read more haha :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • LuvRiot.

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    So, this is my new favorite story? Yes, it would have to be xD
    Please update soon?!
    July 21st, 2011 at 08:10pm
  • vivalajade

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    I love that this story is so different from others
    After a while you get sick of the same stuff.
    This is fresh & keeps me wanting more
    Keep it up please & thank you! :)
    July 21st, 2011 at 08:52am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    alright. I accept this as an update. I don't fully say I want it - I just want what I want.. you know that. I'm a complicated girl.. However, it's not bad... and I'll keep reading it.. blah blah blah....
    July 21st, 2011 at 08:51am
  • bottle bohemia

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    That was a really good chapter. I love the little insight to Spencer and eric's past friendship. Can't wait to see what happens next!
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I'm thinking that the reason why Spencer has such little self-confidence has something to do with the ending of her friendship with Eric and John had something to do with that hence why she hates him.
    July 16th, 2011 at 05:15pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I really like this chapter! I think that Spencer doesn't really love Kennedy and really is just going out with him for her confidence like stated and for the sake of it. It really sucks that everybody judges Spencer for being the Sheriff's daughter because they don't even give her the chance to prove them wrong. I think that Spencer is gonna fall in love with John and end up breaking his heart because she might still feel the need to be with Kennedy!
    July 16th, 2011 at 03:12pm
  • ImaginaryEnemy

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    umm i totally went to see Harry Potter
    Last night!! sooooooo awesome!!
    xoxo Zoey

    ps cute story
    July 16th, 2011 at 07:58am
  • unforgiven anchors

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    All I have to say at the moment is, I love this story. Keep writing!
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:00pm
  • lovelyhope

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    I like how Kennedy isn't friends with them. Wow, that sounded rude bahaha. What I mean is that I like how the guys are from 2 different social circles which means something semi-big is going to happen to bring them together so they can form the band. Since Spencer is with Kennedy she'll be included in this "coming together" and then something will happen with her and John. Just not sure what yet.
    July 12th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    alright sluts... are you gonna keep writing this or am I gonna have to beg for it like I do with the Chestnut Tree one? So help me, god.....

    btw... love you both.
    July 11th, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I don't have any predictions yet, but I do love where this seems to be going already! I haven't started over analyzing yet so that's why this comment is so short hahaha.
    July 11th, 2011 at 08:38pm
  • ExplosiveEmily

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    I'm excited about how this story is going I hope you update soon. :)
    July 11th, 2011 at 11:20am
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    This is starting off really well, i'm excited to see how you take this! :)
    July 11th, 2011 at 10:00am