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  • whilethefirewasout

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    BUT I LOVE SAD! But omg, they're both living lies. The obvious reason why they aren't happy is because they aren't communicating! Stupid Rose and John. They gotta get their shit together! I have a strong feeling that they're gonna end up breaking up but fix things in the end because for things to get better, they have to get worse. I don't really know what else to say. I love it.
    July 30th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • hachie

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    I take being engaged to an rising rockstar is tiring.
    Since Rose has circles around her eyes and she is seems to be bitter about relationships right now.
    She is tired because of John's drinking habit and how he seems to only want to party most of the time.
    It makes me so sad to see two people that are engaged to be worlds apart when they are in the same room and they can't be the same as they were before around each other.
    Rose is just putting a fake smile on for everyone when she is actually suffering inside.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 30th, 2011 at 12:53am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    This is soooo sad :(
    July 30th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • becauseiamfree

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    brilliant chapter!
    <3
    July 30th, 2011 at 12:46am
  • vivalajade

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    Such a good story!
    Also love the skinny love references in the chapter titles:)
    Please keep it up:)
    July 27th, 2011 at 07:15am
  • bitter.love

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    2 of my favourite writers together.
    July 27th, 2011 at 05:23am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    omg. I love this chapter too! vpoejbdgefewjhdsihte!!!!!!!!! I like how John just decided to take her on a date right there and then. Spontaneous, I like it. And she agreed! I have a feeling that things were as good as they were bad! Meaning, it's really really bad current time, but past time things were really really good!
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:29am
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    omg. I love this chapter too! vpoejbdgefewjhdsihte!!!!!!!!! I like how John just decided to take her on a date right there and then. Spontaneous, I like it. And she agreed! I have a feeling that things were as good as they were bad! Meaning, it's really really bad current time, but past time things were really really good!
    July 27th, 2011 at 12:29am
  • MYP

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    PAGE FOUR ALREADY WHAT EVEN.
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • MYP

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    Loved the update! I love how you guys are doing this, with the present and the past. It's so good! Their date was adorable, I freaking loved it! I cannot wait for more!
    Update again soon please!!!
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:54pm
  • Eri.

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    Ahh. So freaking CUTE! ;D
    I can't wait for an update!
    July 26th, 2011 at 11:05pm
  • lemelime394

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    SO CUTE LOVE IT LOVE IT can't wait for current depressing stuff :)
    July 26th, 2011 at 04:57am
  • psuche

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    Aww johns sucha romantic!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 09:04pm
  • tmdaisy22

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    Ooh, I love how they met:) Great chapter, can't wait for more!
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:35pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    LOVED this chapter!!!
    the date was so cute but weird, I would never go out with a stranger but I would do it if John asked me to just like Rose did AHAH.
    July 25th, 2011 at 04:10pm
  • hachie

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    I love the second chapter because it completely clashes with the first chapter!
    This chapter is more upbeat and it's when John and Rose got to know each other.
    So they both got ditched by their dates, Porter having to go back to work and that other chick going off god knows where.
    But the part that made me laugh the most was when Rose thinking about how she has a mace and she could take John on since she has taken karate classes!
    I look forward to the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • lovelyhope

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    This chapter was adorable. I love how they just keep randomly meeting.
    July 25th, 2011 at 03:07am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    Sooooo cute <3
    July 24th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • barnes bucky.

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    Aww, this chapter was cute. (:
    Update soon!
    July 24th, 2011 at 09:51pm
  • Emiwk

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    Aww! They're like the perfect couple except in the present. Haha.
    I can't believe you're going to school... tomorrow. My school starts in a month.

    I love this story! Can't wait for update. (:
    July 24th, 2011 at 06:59pm
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